|Reviews for Neonlights and Sobbing Children|
| HyperMonicaPenWork chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
aaaand then they blow up the booth. TAKE THAT!
| rocket rodriguez chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
| DP-shrine-in-closet-girl chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Dude! This story was amazing! I love your writing, it all flowed beautifully!
And the ending was absolutely perfect! Excellent job!
| Kairan1979 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I always liked the superhero stories when the fair games are rigged, but thanks to superpowers or gadgets the toys are won anyway.
| sweetlilsunshine chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Would it sound bad if I said I'm starting to hate this guy? Anyway, u should write more, I'm dying to see what he thinks when Gru blows his pants off!
| RayLedgend chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Oh the irony in that first review P Anyway, yep, it's the sad truth of those carnival places. We're all aware P
| ChaosDarkie chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Nice fic! Kinda sad 'cause it's true. I noticed just a couple small mistakes, like
In the life of the fiar-grounds, the booths had to be rigged,... Should be fair-grounds.
It's a vicious cyle that... Should be cycle.
Watch out for little thongs like those. But overall, I liked the sort of bittersweet, jaded tone. And the ending leads right up to the scene in the movie. I also like that you chose a character that probably nearly everyone dislikes to focus on. You gave him believable reasons as to why he was a jerk, and you humanized him a bit. Really nice job.