Hey hey hey!
I know it's been around 8 months to year, but i found my way back to FFN and what do I find?
An awesome update!
Your humour is wonderful as always.
Poor Kiba... XD
I don't know if you're still going with this, but whatever you're working on, keep up the great work!
(~just an fyi, still safe here in the Ooruchi-proof bunker u~)
-Rolco

This chapter we awesome. The fact that they drove a car to Ino's house, and the fact that Inoichi was holding up que cards for Shino... Lmao. And Clint was a hilariously out of place name for that bug. xD

Hahahahahahahahahahaha this entire chapter just had me going "wut." lmao. That ending. Everything escalated so quickly. And I laughed and laughed and laughed. And the Hokage encouraging Asuma to smoke... XD

Omg, I'm dying. Hahahaahah. Chapter one was great! Death Note, Pokemon... BURGER KING. Lmao. I really didn't expect this to be as funny as it turned out to be, but it was HILARIOUS. I'm super excited to read the other chapters!

On another note, I love how you exaggerated the characters' already prevalent characteristics; it was a perfect approach for a comedic story. Sakura's personality especially... It made me cringe, but in the best way possible. (I've always found Sakura annoying.)

And I don't know why, but when Sasuke mentioned the fact that he kills people in Shippuden, I died. xD

As soon as the plot demanded it... XD
And also, Thomas the Tank Engine was literally my SHIT as a kid, so that was pretty awesome!
I'm very exited to see exactly what happens with Naruto, Kiba, Akamaru, Itachi and Hinata in the real world! (Whatever you do, do NOT let Kiba watch the ASPCA commercials!) -
As always, wonderful new chapters! I can't wait to read more!
~Rolco The Fallen Angel (signing off from underground Oorochi-proof bunker... my Sasu-plush will be safe here...) Xx

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Wow, phantom... Valentine's has a new meaning to me now...
And i also will never let a toad help me publish my fics...
XD
'M-rated suff in the kitchen'! Lol!

XD
Therapy, who would've guessed? Orochimaru is getting sneakier and sneakier... -_-
* barricades self in pillow fortress with Sasuke plushie *
He'll never get in here! Mwahahahahahaaaa!
Great chapter!

Wow! I can already see so much sarcasm and attitude in one chapter XD this is just amazing XD burger king coupons! That was a nice touch XD just so much random stuff already! And also is his dad not going to be able to get out of his grave? XD

is it over?
:'(

But... he still didn't dieee!

*GASP* Sasu-kun didn't die!
...
do i cheer? Boo?I'm so confused...

i want a Sasuke toy...
YES! Sasu-kun is a cat person! and he dosen't like dogs for the same reasons i don't!
this is the coolest thing ever... -
and Sasu-kun dies every chapter! im a sasuke-lover as well as a lee- and gaara-lover, but... that's so hilarious! Sorry sasu-kun!

Rolco The Fallen Angel Xx

LOLOLOLOLOL!

Naruto, you idiot.,

(Coming here from writers united)

While I admittedly don't know much about Naruto (or any anime, for that matter) This was...interesting to read. the title of the story makes it very clear that this is a spoof of the canon (I know for a fact that Pokemon don't exist in Naruto-land)

For the most part, your spelling/grammar is good, but you seem to forget small things like adding an 's' onto the end of word to change it to the plural form. I.e: "The three ninja were waiting" should be "The three ninjas were waiting"

Best chapter yet(Insert troll-face here).