|Reviews for Naruto spoofing|
| YoursTruly519 chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Wow! I can already see so much sarcasm and attitude in one chapter XD this is just amazing XD burger king coupons! That was a nice touch XD just so much random stuff already! And also is his dad not going to be able to get out of his grave? XD
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 20 . 8/3/2014
is it over?
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 19 . 8/3/2014
But... he still didn't dieee!
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 18 . 8/3/2014
*GASP* Sasu-kun didn't die!
do i cheer? Boo?I'm so confused...
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 7 . 7/31/2014
i want a Sasuke toy...
YES! Sasu-kun is a cat person! and he dosen't like dogs for the same reasons i don't!
this is the coolest thing ever... -
and Sasu-kun dies every chapter! im a sasuke-lover as well as a lee- and gaara-lover, but... that's so hilarious! Sorry sasu-kun!
Rolco The Fallen Angel Xx
| Madness Sings chapter 21 . 10/24/2013
Naruto, you idiot.,
| aspiringactor chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
(Coming here from writers united)
While I admittedly don't know much about Naruto (or any anime, for that matter) This was...interesting to read. the title of the story makes it very clear that this is a spoof of the canon (I know for a fact that Pokemon don't exist in Naruto-land)
For the most part, your spelling/grammar is good, but you seem to forget small things like adding an 's' onto the end of word to change it to the plural form. I.e: "The three ninja were waiting" should be "The three ninjas were waiting"
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/18/2013
Best chapter yet(Insert troll-face here).
| Books52 chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
Aww poor gara
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
Damn, Itachi so boss.
| wisdom-jewel chapter 20 . 7/16/2013
I don't doubt that Jiraiya would wear a breast cancer awareness shirt. I'm sure he'll love to give out free check-ups. Of course Tsunade would give him a good reason not to.
And of course their ninja, if they don't get caught than they aren't doing anything wrong.
Anyway I love this humorous chapter and I wish you luck.
| Books52 chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
Omg I should really go to sleep now
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
OMG THE CHIPS
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
OMG MINATO AHAHAAHAHAHHAHHAHH)/)
| wisdom-jewel chapter 19 . 7/9/2013
In this story, the fourth wall has no meaning what-so-ever. Good luck with the next chapter.