|Reviews for Naruto spoofing|
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 24 . 5/29
As soon as the plot demanded it... XD
And also, Thomas the Tank Engine was literally my SHIT as a kid, so that was pretty awesome!
I'm very exited to see exactly what happens with Naruto, Kiba, Akamaru, Itachi and Hinata in the real world! (Whatever you do, do NOT let Kiba watch the ASPCA commercials!) -
As always, wonderful new chapters! I can't wait to read more!
~Rolco The Fallen Angel (signing off from underground Oorochi-proof bunker... my Sasu-plush will be safe here...) Xx
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 22 . 3/10
Wow, phantom... Valentine's has a new meaning to me now...
And i also will never let a toad help me publish my fics...
'M-rated suff in the kitchen'! Lol!
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 21 . 3/10
Therapy, who would've guessed? Orochimaru is getting sneakier and sneakier... -_-
* barricades self in pillow fortress with Sasuke plushie *
He'll never get in here! Mwahahahahahaaaa!
| YoursTruly519 chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Wow! I can already see so much sarcasm and attitude in one chapter XD this is just amazing XD burger king coupons! That was a nice touch XD just so much random stuff already! And also is his dad not going to be able to get out of his grave? XD
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 20 . 8/3/2014
is it over?
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 19 . 8/3/2014
But... he still didn't dieee!
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 18 . 8/3/2014
*GASP* Sasu-kun didn't die!
do i cheer? Boo?I'm so confused...
| Rolco The Fallen Angel chapter 7 . 7/31/2014
i want a Sasuke toy...
YES! Sasu-kun is a cat person! and he dosen't like dogs for the same reasons i don't!
this is the coolest thing ever... -
and Sasu-kun dies every chapter! im a sasuke-lover as well as a lee- and gaara-lover, but... that's so hilarious! Sorry sasu-kun!
Rolco The Fallen Angel Xx
| Driving Flame chapter 21 . 10/24/2013
Naruto, you idiot.,
| aspiringactor chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
(Coming here from writers united)
While I admittedly don't know much about Naruto (or any anime, for that matter) This was...interesting to read. the title of the story makes it very clear that this is a spoof of the canon (I know for a fact that Pokemon don't exist in Naruto-land)
For the most part, your spelling/grammar is good, but you seem to forget small things like adding an 's' onto the end of word to change it to the plural form. I.e: "The three ninja were waiting" should be "The three ninjas were waiting"
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/18/2013
Best chapter yet(Insert troll-face here).
| Books52 chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
Aww poor gara
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
Damn, Itachi so boss.
| wisdom-jewel chapter 20 . 7/16/2013
I don't doubt that Jiraiya would wear a breast cancer awareness shirt. I'm sure he'll love to give out free check-ups. Of course Tsunade would give him a good reason not to.
And of course their ninja, if they don't get caught than they aren't doing anything wrong.
Anyway I love this humorous chapter and I wish you luck.
| Books52 chapter 3 . 7/15/2013
Omg I should really go to sleep now