|Reviews for Moving Mountains|
| ruukii chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
i really love this fic very much and definitely one of my favs! but it seems you have stopped writing and havent updated for so long now T_T
| Victoblerone chapter 4 . 12/16/2010
This is AMAZING! I love it sosososo much ! I really hope you update soon ! It's killing me to know what is going to happen next!
You are also a very good writer! Very detailed and your ideas flow together with some foreshadowing, yet you don't give too much away. I love your writing style, and I can't wait to read the the next chapter!
| Team Kaka-Sensei chapter 4 . 12/11/2010
I finally got to read chapter 4 of this! Haha :) And the plot keeps thickening! It seems to be going in a really interesting direction and I can't wait for more! I hope you find time in your hectic schedule to update the story, it'd be sad to see it go unfinished :/
Great job! Update soon!
| Jozern chapter 4 . 9/27/2010
Sounds like an good and interesting story. Mayby show some more of Naruto doing hokage work in the future? And again, the paperwork is tormenting the poor hokage. WTF? This is Naruto the god of kage bunshin. But seriosly very well written and interesting keep it going.
| ofdarknesschaos chapter 4 . 9/2/2010
Please update whenever you have the time to! I really like this story alot:3 I can't wait for Sakura's expression when she finds out Naruto is the Hokage.
| teiku- hime chapter 4 . 9/1/2010
ok im soooo lost. why did sakura leave konoha in the first place because i don't get it. and last but not least, is this a "narusaku" fic?
| xDARKNESS chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
Good chapter, and yes, I agree the pace is somewhat slow. But you do make it up with a poignant plot in addition to being well done. Where is the NaruSaku moments :(. lol, glad to hear you found a beta and I look forward to the next chapter.
Good Luck and Warmest Regards,
| xDARKNESS chapter 2 . 8/31/2010
Interesting chapter, i don't really like the black hair ordeal though, the pink hair is what mande sakura, sakura.
| xDARKNESS chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
I found the story a while ago, added it to my favs, and now I have to chance to pawn through it. So far, it is quite intriguing. You set it up to where it did catch my attention and want to read more, however I feel there are more things that need explaining. Such as ages, the timeline, a little more of the aftermatch of the war, etc. Perhaps you have done so in the next chapter, we shall see. Anyway, nice start and I look forward to the upcoming developments.
| The A-Reader chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
I like this story. I'm not usually a fan of slow moving stories but it's going very nicely. I want some more Naruto and Sakura action :o Keep on writing :D
| Kubani14 chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
I love it! I really love it :D
It's funny, it's sad, it's well written, it's everything :D
I can't wait for the fifth Chapter but I think it will take some time until you update (School bears the blame...dammit!) :D
| Bub chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
I'm afraid I found this to be... well, less well-written than the previous three, with some rather awkward pace and strucure and/or flow, some dubious grammar (and some unnecessary typos/misspellings). Kakashi in the office especially felt a little ...off.
"Sakura felt bad. When she FELT for Ame, she FELT without telling anyone." -Assuming FELT should be LEFT, I think this should be picked up in a read-through -as well as calling Sandaime Sandrine.
On the whole it seemed that this chapter (or at least first half-2/3) was left unedited, compared to the previous three.
The plot and pace of the story is, to my mind, fine, slowly building up to?.. There might be some plot-holes but I expect you'll fill them, and so I'll look forward to the next chapter.
| Animaman chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
Good chapter, although maybe you should start throwing in some couples from Konoha, especially when it comes to Hinata. Be nice if Naruto gets a backbone when it comes to his aide because whenever Sakura returns, it would be two against one. By the way, what's with the summaries?
| holydemon00 chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
this chapter is great, slow-pacing and full of emotions. The plot also thickens, as it seems that Konoha and Ame were having political issues. The semi-cliffhanger is well-timed, too. I call it semi because it's almost 99% that Naruto was speaking to her. Only 2 people know her current appearance, and Sasuke would sooner die than call her Sakura-chan.
Look forward to your next chapter, you'd better explain why Konoha suddenly attacked an outpost of Ame.
| Narutomasterfan chapter 4 . 8/27/2010