|Reviews for Stuck with a Green Idiot in a Cage|
| Star-The-Writer chapter 1 . 1/13
| Dixxy chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Not bad a (first) fanfic', i must say ! :)
There was a really nice mix of humour
& emotion in this, an harmonious
blend of friendship &... blooming love ?
Funny moments wz BB looking in vain
for his com' & getting locked up after
pressing that buttons... and his non-
hilarious jokes (except to himself...) !
But i did prefer the tender moments,
the compliment if BB, the blushes of Raven,
the awkward silences... and Raven checking
if BB was serious wz his compliment ! All
these emotional, very sweet moments were
And i also love how ya expose their similarities (both heartbroken after a betrayal) & make them share their intimate trouble, doubts, perhaps fears, how they get closer to each other through these confessions, how they mutually support beach other and how, in the end, after calling BB an "idiot", she finally ends up enjoying their time together.
Really touching moments, after the funny ones. You first built a light (i.e. humorous) atmosphere before making things more serious, more profound. Before deepening the two Titans' relationship. And that gain in maturity, seriousness, but also sweetness is
what makes your story that interesting.
Kudos to ya for this most moving piece !
Take care !
,,, Léo '''
| flightlessraven chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
this was actually really really really good for a 1st fanfic. i liked it. a lot. :D
| Ashante' Roxx13 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
that was amazing...truly amazing. UPDATE SOON!
| Wolvmbm chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Great idea for a one-shot as it was a simple Raven and Beast boy moment where BB complex things into making it worse. :D
ALso I do agree in stating that Raven and Beast boy are as different as day and night and I must say that it was a great comparsion you brought in this story when it comes to their past loves. :D
Please do keep up such great ideas like this one for future reads. ;p
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Short yet good. Great job.
Keep the good writing
| FelynxTiger chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
i think ... for your first fanfic ... IT WAS EXCELLENT you should continue with the stories your are very good at it next time you should thing about making a story with several chapters but one shot is good as well
KEEP UP ! :P
| BayleeBug96 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
It was okay fora 1st try but most people do several chapters to a story, it would be great if you added more to this!:)