Reviews for Harry Potter and the Spirit Within
Kristine Thorne chapter 7 . 11/25/2004
If anyone ever tells you this wasn't worth the wait, just kick their ass! Smile! This was a brilliant chapter, though I can't help worrying about the mortal perril. Is it Purcy? I really would like to start seeing a little more Snape, but that's just because I enjoy his Snarkyness. LOL! Can't wait for more.
Western Master 3 chapter 7 . 11/25/2004
A few things Snape says in this chapter seem to be what he would say, but not in the way he would say it.
magnetic-starfish chapter 7 . 11/25/2004
Cool fic!
hermionepotter141 chapter 7 . 11/25/2004
wow I love your story it is magnificent! This is one of the best written stories I have ever read! Your plot is soo intracite I can't stop reading and although I can tell you don't update too frequently I am still so excited for your next update!

I especially love the reasoning behind Harry going to Snape once he doens't trust Dumbly dore! I love the way you have those two interacting!

Awsome job! Hopefully I will see an update soon but I know you said something is always wrong with when you try to update !
holly chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
i have become readdicted to this story. i vaguely remember reading it, and now im reading it again and loving every minute of it. i seriously forgot what it was about though! its been so long.

Wren Truesong chapter 7 . 11/25/2004
You UPDATED! HURRAH! and there are lots of chapters I didn't remember, thus making it seem like I had an entire new story, just for me!

I really, really -adored- Harry's rant about blood... *giggles* Poor Sev, don't let your head explode.

I look forward to seeing more of your subplots... like Percy (-is- it Percy in Peril, poor lonely boy? and is he still going about with Penny Clearwater?) and Ron and Hermione's Arithmancy spat, and, just everything really... even the one with the Dursleys in it, 'cos whilst I hate them a lot their influence on the rest of the story is unavoidable.

Thanks ever so for sharing your hard work with us! Ganbatte ne!
Litha Riddle chapter 7 . 11/25/2004
I would just like to start this review with a huge congratulations. This is one of the best, most cleanly written I've read in a long time. You've done justice to the characters and yourself with the skill you've shown. I'm also a bit relieved to see that there will be no romance, not that I don't like that stuff but this site as become saturated with the stuff. It's good to read a story with more soul, as well as concentrating on a plot. I'm really interested on what will happen with the imprisoned muggles. After all there was witch burnings and the like so muggles could have a drastic impact when organised, I mean to use magic takes more energy than to pull a trigger. I find it good that unlike other authors you have portrayed the muggles as actually being as dangerous as we know they can be eg. WWI, WWII, Iraq, Vietnam and other disasters caused by non magic. Also can I say not to let the narrow minded reviewers get to you, they are probably foolish twits with nothing better to do. I mean if they are such experts then I'd like to see them write a fic as good as yours. I mean when I find a fic I'm not fond of instead of bad mouthing I try to write how I would see it, after all we all can't be clones. Also about the fawkes thing I think that person was being a bit thick, doesn't he shed his feathers before a burning day lol.

I apologise for waffling, I feel angry when people bully people for know reason and wanted you to know you've got me hooked. Also about the chapter lengths being long, I love long chapters even if my mum doesn't (my mums got internet, I haven't lol). Please don't let these negative people get to you, thanks for this great story.

CRose chapter 7 . 11/25/2004
Impressive story and quite a long read as well. I only have one problems so far and it's more of an observation than a really problem. Harry's Life is a Living HELL. It has to be said. No matter how much has happened to him he keeps on going, but his guardians beat and ridicule him, they encurage their son to do the same and worse.

Then when he's finally able to leave them, he comes to school and what happens? More of the same, from the teachers, to people who think he lies about everything, to a government that goes out of it's way to to let everyone know that he's a deranged lunatic.

Now things are getting even worse as he's pitied by the world and rediculed by the adults and his anger and patients are being stretched to the limits, which I think is what this whole fic is about. He hasn't broke yet but when he does he's going to kill someone, Draco came within an inch of dying for his words.

When Harry blows and directs that fury, what dumbldore and everyone else are pushing him towards, I'll be surprised if the school survives.
Flamingteen chapter 3 . 11/24/2004

I just found this story and i've been reading it for a few hours. (yes, I'm a slow reader, but the chapters are long XD)

You are evil XD You left me with a cliffhanger and it's late... so I must retire... but I will be back tomorrow to read the rest.

This, by the way, is excellent. I love how each chapter is long... :D
kitten chapter 7 . 11/24/2004
OMG Thank you so much for updating! its been...way too long! You don't need my critizism your story is great! I just wish you would update more often but anyway it was worth the wait. Great job update soon! Please!
enb2004 chapter 7 . 11/24/2004
This is a really great story! Sorry about your other reviewers. I hope you don't get any more flames, because they just kinda stink. Good luck with both of your writings!
Nemo Returning chapter 7 . 11/24/2004
Thanks for updating!

This is one of my all-times favorites :)

P.S. This Figg of yours is such a bitch. Hope she'll get hers...
Aki no Yume1 chapter 7 . 11/24/2004
Oh my, I wonder who is in danger...anyway please update soon! I really like your story!
rosiegirl chapter 7 . 11/24/2004
This story is quite interesting. I'm a bit worried getting too involved with it, since its taken almost 3 years for 7 chapters, but as long as you don't give up on it, I'll keep reading as it updates.
duj chapter 3 . 11/24/2004
Interesting discussion of wandless magic and the role of wands as "batteries".
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