Reviews for Harry Potter and the Spirit Within
Pointed Teeth chapter 6 . 8/20/2004
I love it when i find a good HP story, especially when i'm just randomly surfing, and yours is one of the best i've seen in a long time.

I only have one request, could Sebastian feature a little more? In the cannon Harry's parselmouth gift is never used enough and i love to see it in fiction. Oh, and could you please have Persy fall off the face of the earth? Pretty please?

monica85 chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
when are you going to update? i've been waiting fo so long. please update soon.
aitvaras chapter 6 . 8/1/2004
hey... i finally decided to read your story after seeing it crop up on almost every favourites list i check. The main reasons i didn't want to at first being that it's unfinished, untouched for a year and having only 6 chapters. However, after reading it, i must say that i have no regrets at all, unless you're thinking of discontinuing the story permanently.

This story's one of the most thought out and definitely one of the best i've ever read. I still can't believe how you managed to pay attention to nearly every single aspect and subplot and explain how it affects everyone. It's really a pity that you haven't updated for so long.. I'm really looking forward ot reading the rest of the story, as are many people, i'm sure... The story definitely deserves to be on all favourites lists.. and if it were a book, i'd definitely buy every single book written by you. ) just like i've turned into a dan brown fanatic after reading the Da Vinci Code..

anyway, hope you'll find it into your heart to update sometime.. i'll keep checking every week )
Go.Be.It chapter 6 . 7/24/2004
very good if only you would update
Tessa chapter 6 . 7/23/2004
Thank you, for a while now i've been looking for a harry potter story worth reading, and finally i found one. please please continued with this story it would be a real shame if u did't. thank once more and please update!
Treck chapter 6 . 7/22/2004
Wonderfull please continue!
Sara chapter 6 . 7/17/2004
This story is unbelievably amazing! All the detail, and dialouge is incredible! Wow- I am just dying to find out what will happen to Harry, the Order, the Dursleys, and everyone! Please update soon!
Kat chapter 6 . 7/3/2004
This story is great! Your characters are well thought out and you are very descriptive about their personalities and expressions. I also feel your story flows and everything seems to come together well. Keep it coming!
Hannalice chapter 6 . 6/23/2004
Oh my. This has to be one of the most well thought out, best written fanfics I've ever had the priveledge to read. I like the fact that you hide clues in your stories (very Rowling-esqe... but I'm sure you've heard that a lot)This is just a great story. The whole thing is just so believable (in it's own HP way) I really can't think of any suggestions that could possibly make this story better, other than to say hurry up! Actually, scratch that. Take your time. I can wait for a good thing... knowing it took a bit of time means that it'll be all the better for it. Happy writing!
Alfa Wolfcub chapter 6 . 6/20/2004
Stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid stupid STUPID RETARDED HORRIBLE INCREDIBLY MALICIOUS CLIFFHANGERS! GR

But aside from that i love your story and am *ehem*... patiently ... waiting for the next chapter : )


P.S. I clicked all the checkboxes under the review box.
Bright1 chapter 6 . 5/28/2004
Wow, I really lick this fic! But I wanted to know if you are going to contiue it or not. I see that your chapters are quite log so I would imagin that they must take awhile to write so I'm not sure if your just not done with another chapter yet or if you will not be continueing. If it's not too much trouble could you e-mail me the answer.


Lilas chapter 6 . 5/26/2004
So now that it's been over a year that you've last updated, and I've re-read the ENTIRE story so I could remember what it was about, WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING? *pouts* I hope the answer is soon. And I hope you haven't given up on this fic because it really is very good. And I hope Sebastian shows up again! Me like him. *grins* Well, that's about all... Just thought I would harrass you some to see if maybe we could get another chapter out of you
Bu chapter 6 . 5/22/2004
such an awesome story! u havent updated in a long time tho... *cries* i wanna know what happens next! like y is Harry bein so silent? please update soon!
walrus chapter 6 . 5/22/2004
argh! It's been over a year! When will you udpate?
Tze Siang Wee chapter 2 . 5/10/2004
I found the story so a bit farfetched, and I've been wondering does the author's hatred for Dursleys have to go beyond to hurt Harry to be exagerrated?
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