Reviews for Kids can be heroes to
Izzy Jizzy chapter 6 . 12/20/2011
I like it. Continuen and don't give up.
GingerNinja1111 chapter 6 . 12/26/2010
Very awesome story! I'm actually doing a tv series with my friend forKNIS. We have completely original characters. I'm off to drink hot cocoa! Update soon!
cheether chapter 6 . 10/28/2010
It is a good thing to know what they are up against.
esprit en deuil chapter 5 . 10/2/2010
great story so far :) can't wait to read more
sundarkeyes chapter 5 . 9/13/2010

I really thought you won't update this great fiction...

come on you have to write more I dieing here :D

Please Please I can't wait to find out what happens next...

keep it up *thumps up*
soccergil98 chapter 5 . 9/11/2010
Oh my goodness! I love your story! I added it to my favorites, and I don't usually do that! I love this story please update soon. It's very creative and u didn't see that many grammar mistakes for checking over it.

Great story!

XX-Samantha-XX chapter 5 . 9/10/2010
Nuuuuu! A shot being fired :(:(:( I wanna know what happens now, great chapter :D i really can't wait for the next one. Great job!
cheether chapter 5 . 9/9/2010
Good story...Where was Jackson and his gun?
angeleyes46 chapter 5 . 9/9/2010
keep up the great work
WCUGirl chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
Still just as excellent as it started off. :) Great chapter-quit apologizing! :)

Love Jen
Gloworm41 chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
Very nice chapter it will be interesting to see what happens when Sr. finds out Tony is gone, will he raise a ruckus or will he simply be glad that Tony is gone?
XX-Samantha-XX chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
Woop woop, Gibbs got Tony out of his houes...yay...good chapter :D soo cant wait for the next one :D
angeleyes46 chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
keep up the great work
Graphicmaker1 chapter 4 . 8/9/2010
This story is quite odd with the team being kids but it works. Poor Tony. I hope the next chapter will show Tony staying at Gibbs house and meeting his parents. I wonder what Gibbs would say about Tony's teddy bear. Hopefully he can reassure Tony it's ok. Maybe we could meet Abby by her coming over to Gibbs house. Update soon please!
XX-Samantha-XX chapter 3 . 8/6/2010
Oh man,...nooooo...i can't believe you left us with a cliffy like that...poor Tony :(...someone better come to his rescue...please...anyone :((((( Great story so far and having all the characters its soooo coool... i really do love it...great job so far :D
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