Reviews for My Destiny, My Fervent Plea
EclipseIllusion chapter 8 . 11/9/2010
This seems interesting. Just try putting more spacing in between some of your dialogue.
Allen Bedillion Trahurn chapter 3 . 11/7/2010
Interesting beginning. I like it, well thought out and well written.
Ashita-sanHarmony101 chapter 6 . 10/27/2010
I love this chapter it's my fav so far! Esp. the very first part concerning William and that part between Sarah and Daniel (mainly) plus William was sad :(. Anyway good chappie and update soon )
TotallyCaptivated chapter 5 . 10/24/2010
does Soul like Sarah?
Ashita-san chapter 5 . 10/20/2010
Well,dang! Daniel and Sarah :( sad situation.
Ashita-san chapter 3 . 10/20/2010
LMAO! 'Nature is perverted that way.' and Soul is being a disbeliever. :)
Ashita-san chapter 2 . 10/20/2010
This chapter is sooo mysterious but then again it is the prologue!
EclipseIllusion chapter 3 . 10/15/2010
It seems pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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