|Reviews for Walls of Jericho|
| MeldonElraenhie chapter 1 . 1/2
Thanks for writing this story :3 I love it!
| ultrafan1 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I'm not going to lie, upon seeing the title I immediately clicked on the story in order to see if my long awaited desire to see a fanfic where Shinji was raised by Chris Jericho finally became a reality. But still, even if that wasn't to be, I'm glad I clicked on your fic because it was very well written and I liked how you were able to do a nail fic without doing any of the cliches you wrote about in your notes. All in all, the story was very well written and I am definitely adding it to my favorites.
| yclui chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
i would read a full fic that branches off from this. Just saying. Great work!
| Ranma-sensei chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I love it! Making characters think things through really changes a lot, especially for Evangelion.
It's interesting how one always finds new points of deviation even after the nth Nail Fic - very well done, indeed. As it were, Post-TI Asuka probably will have to spell it out for Shinji to get the reference - but that's the problem with cultural differences, I guess. And I bet Anno planned it to be like this.
| bldude chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
| Kount Xero chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I almost laughed when you gave the "and THAT'S how you nail a fic." Especially with work like Evangelion where the slightest shift could alter the entirety of the story after, but, as we know that Asuka didn't want to be alone when she said that (she was, if anything, disappointed that Shinji hadn't even protested) THIS IS, after all, how you nail a fic.
Well played dear sir/madam. Well played.
| XPloyalist chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
All I can say is just, wow. That was incredible.
| AiSard chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
nice. although the fact that a guy has to actually look up book references to understand a girl is a bit.. p
| SkyeandMax chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Awww! That was really sweet. Shinji actually uses his head and heart together for once :) My only small objection is that you didn't continue it. It would have been far more interesting if we(readers) could actually watch the changes ripple out. Nonetheless a very good oneshot.
| Lord of Murder chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
| Julian Chester chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
This is damn good, you know that?
I always like seeing variations on Evangelion that turn out better, although I do admit that sometimes I prefer variations that don't change something huge. It seems much more challenging, but at the same time much more gratifying in a way, to read a story in which the variation, the key difference, is the mythical nail from the phrase "for want of a nail." Nothing tremendous, just one small thing, a pebble falling down a mountainside that by the time it reaches the bottom has turned into an avalanche that utterly buries Gendo's wretched scenario. I don't know if I ever would have been able to do this myself.
I am mildly disappointed that you only wrote the part describing the one thing, the single, small, almost insignificant act that changed everything, and did not continue with the rest of it. But then, that probably was never the point.
I tip my hat to you. This is very well done.
| nervwriter chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
A good one shot. I think Shinji might have been just a tad bit too perceptive here, but overall it worked quite well. Also, I'd like to ask for your permision if could do a story expanding your idea beyond a one-shot, if I may. Just send me a message whenever you can. Thanks!
| Archnecromancer King chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Actually found the story very interesting. Note 10.
| justbehappydammit chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Very interesting. I'd love to see in detail how this affects everything. It was hard to follow at times, but it was still very good.
| ByLanternLight chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
This was a strong story. Good job. 5/5.