Reviews for I Wouldn't Breathe If He Ever Left
disolution-th0310 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
This story was amazing. Like actually a masterpiece.

Your style of writing is incredible and has drawn a completely different image of the two main protagonists!

Once again, brilliant work :)
marajay04 chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
afallenblackrose chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Yum. Absolutely hot. :D
Lady Missa kins chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Please write more! I love your way of story telling!
Tracer Fallon chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Excellent! -except I want Hina to die! LOL! (PGSM is so different than the other SMs, I'm sure you're right and hina is nice. but I hate her heh!)
EvaC chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Really enjoyed this and hope you might consider writting more to it. You could do so much with it. (hint, hint) I like that it's from PGSM. I love watching that now and then so much I had to buy the DVD's and I wish there were more stories using the characters from that. Hummmmm I might have to do one later...

Any ways another great story but please think about doing more! chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
aww dang it this short story has potiental but it was great lol