Reviews for If on a Winter's Night
TwistedNDHead chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Your chapter was an emotional roller coaster, definitely needed those tissues! It was so beautifully written! I love your story and I love those boys. Your story was not only beautifully written but also thought provoking and educational. Already looking forward to the epilogue and thank you so much for sharing your talent x
Mayuri love cullens chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Its amazing really its so sweet that it hurts really great
sue273 chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Perfect. Just perfect and absolutely beautiful.

I would like to add my few words of thanks, not only for this wonderful chapter but for the entire story. It takes me forever to write a 5K chapter so I dread to think of the hours and hours you must have spent on this masterpiece. Thank you, Val, for the amazing connection you built between your boys. Their love for each other just oozes from the page/screen. I'm sad the journey is almost over but I am sure I will re-visit this story many more times.
Kikiki.83 chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
I'm crying like a stupid in front of my computer reading this chapter!It was really managed to create the kind of unconditional love that we should all want to find!really...I think I'm amazed!
bjelaja chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Maybe I'm your writing! Gosh, once again you got me in tears and for a moment I really thought they won't make it (both a littel pigheaded, aren't they?). Can't wait for the epi and on the other hand I'm so sad this story comes to an end then... sigh. Thanks for this wonderful chapter.
Julestwentysix chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Amazing story, beautifully written 3

Hugs x
lovaboy chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
That was just beautiful! All better now :)
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
God that was lovely, sat here now with lots of tears for them both. xx
My Robsession chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the epilogue, though I will be very sad when it is over.
Firefly1989 chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Oh my God... I read this chapter while still in bed and it left me curled up in a ball of sobbing mess. I admit I was worried that there might not be HEA for a minute after the meadow in this chapter. And then when Edward stood on the stage... Wow, I still can't get over how amazing this story is :)
There is only an epilogue left? I'll try not to think about it now (I'm still shaky from the chapter) and leave it for the sobfest when it's all posted. I better stock up on kleenex though..
Thank you so much for the chapter. There are no words to describe my love for your story :-)

Emmyb1 chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Wow, made the mistake of reading this in the office. Once again your writing is heartbreaking and uplifting.

Thank you
ArekWhitlock chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
This chapt was so painful to read but in the end, love won!
You're amazing!
bbbluez chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Beautiful! The darkness Edward was feeling was heartbreaking. The meadow scene had me in tears. Jasper's love and belief in Edward won out in the end. Their lives will never be perfect or easy but they have strength in each other.
TRIC4R chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
Gooooose bumps and buckets of tears that's all I got to say
HeartOfDarkess chapter 32 . 6/3/2013
OMG. just no words to how heart rendering this chapter was. i was so blinded by my tears and was so unable to speak because of my sobs that my kids actually asked if i was okay. brilliantly done. from the heartache that edward felt, to his attempts to contact jasper, to giving into the darkness and to edward overcoming his fear and driving to the meadow...all if it...every single word choked me up. made my heart swell. caused emotions to spill free without me being able to stop them. no story has ever gotten to me the way yours has...and that's the truth. And see Edward stand up before his class and Jasper pick him up once he fell...and then for them both to come out and edward's family to applaud as the two of them came out and reunited in front of heart was pounding. Just so good. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing such a poignant, beautiful, emotional love story. I will hold it in my heart forever, my friend. xxx Lisa.
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