|Reviews for If on a Winter's Night|
| izziey chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
this story strikes me as incredibly realistic; i've worked with students who use wheelchairs, and many of the details are accurate as to my experience. i am curious if the two weeks is an average amount of time to be in the hospital and if another two weeks would be considered enough time to return to school.
i give jasper all sorts of credit for being both loving and stubborn. i don't know how i would handle being in edward's situation. sometimes i think i would fight and other times i think i'd react just like edward, but for a lot longer.
| The.Dragonfly.Lover chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
Oh, thank heavens. Bloody hell, I was scared! You haven't made me cry yet, but this came /so/ damn close….
| brief-atlas chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
I got the update notification for this fic and as soon as my boyfriend saw it, he asked if I wanted some tissues (he is a fast learner lol). This chapter was like super angsty but I made it through in one sitting. Thank you for sharing.
| jphab chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
I don't think that I have ever cried this much in one chapter. Bless Jaspers heart. Then the text at the end was perfect.
Thanks for sharing something so beautiful,
| owenic chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
How you break my heart. What a wonderful chapter. Angst, hopelessness, loss, heartbreak and at the end - maybe, just maybe a little bit of hope?
I really hope J doesn't walk back inside only for E to tell him to fuck off. I think a part of me will die... LOL
God, my heart breaks for these two boys.
| Mazzer 41 chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
WOW! this story just draws you in and the pain and hurt of Edward and Jasper plays with your emotions, i dont know who i want to hug more, lost count of the tissues used and cant wait for the next chapter
| mrsyt31 chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
This gets better every chapter...
| etwimom chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
WOW! Love it, I'm made it with only one tissue! It was so good I smiled at the end but it was Awesome Im ready for more. This story is so heart wrenching and soooo very good, I feel for both E and J. I can tell this is a long road but I look forward to reading along the whole time. (no need to respond - nntr)
| Ithilien Archer chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
Ugh, this is so freakin sad and haunting. oh, I love it love it love it! But you can't leave us at another ending like that. Please update soon, I beg you!
| secretsforme chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
Yay for Jasper and his stubborness!
| ihatethissite chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
I can't even express how much I love this story. It really moves me, and I can't wait for your updates. Thanks so much for writing, it's amazing.
| bbbluez chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
I was so sad for Jasper while Edward was pushing him away but Jasper stayed strong and pushed back, seems that Edward needs someone to call him out and challenge him a little. Enjoyed the nod to the great Lloyd Dobler! I don't know if you watch Glee but they did a heartbreaking version of "I Wanna Hold Your Hand" this week that made me think of these boys.
| Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
Thanks for the warning, that was so sad, I am really hoping that Jasper can find a way back in, I know it won;t be the same but love helps a lot. xx
| mm60126 chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
I can feel the despair from E and the frusration and stubburness of J...u are good ! don't ever doubt that..u make me FEEL the emotions and that is a rare quality...I can't wait til u give E's pov of his first hardon LOL...that will be awesome..keep up the awesome story...a first of its kind for me by the way...ty
| JasperLuver48 chapter 7 . 10/9/2010
this was truly amazing! I'm so glad Jasper isn't giving up on Edward and I know Edward will come around, I just know it! I'm suffering for both boys and I really love that you are writing this so out there and not sugar coating anything, it just makes it that much better!
Great job all around!