|Reviews for If on a Winter's Night|
| Elicullen26 chapter 32 . 10/9/2013
I can't begin to explain how amazing this was, not only this chacter but the whole story. As I've toll you before, the capacity that you have t make me feel EVERY emotion is truly a gift.
I've cried so much, but the pain and suffering was so worth it, I can see clearly very scene, every expression can hear every word as if I'm right next to the characters.
That part where Jas says "Let it be..." Had me sobbing inconsolably but the ending had be criying and laughing at the same time, I can't even...
Gah I can't wait for the epi, and your future endeavors!
| RP4Ever chapter 32 . 10/6/2013
BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU
| iamonlyone chapter 32 . 9/10/2013
I can't stop crying ...
I'm so glad you stuck with this story. I started following it many months ago, and I grew to love these boys through your amazing writing.
The epilogue will be the icing on the cake!
| HeartRobward chapter 6 . 9/8/2013
I love love love how poetic your Edwards are! Always so romantic!
| HeartRobward chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Awesome story! I love it:)
| brynn.brigham chapter 32 . 8/24/2013
This story was Amazing! I can't wait for the epilogue! I'd love it if you did a sequel! It is just something about the way you write these two characters that just captures me!
| nbkwcbmi chapter 32 . 8/20/2013
| Snappher chapter 32 . 8/12/2013
OMG, I'm sobbing! I've been too afraid to read this update, and started to cry halfway through...I could barely finish! I've had a blue few days, and thought "no, I canNOT handle this breakup tonight! It was so beautiful...there aren't enough adjectives to describe this moment in their lives and their reunion...I was hating Edward's guts at the beginning and wanted to run him right over the edge of the Grand freakin' Canyon! Jasper is just magical..gah...I sound like an idiot, I know! Hopefully, I'll be more eloquent reviewing the epilogue!
THANK YOU, a million times, for pulling Edward's head out of his ass for him. :)
| crosunshine chapter 4 . 7/14/2013
i am in tears... :(
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 32 . 7/14/2013
It was wonderful and heartwarming and just the best ending of a chapter. Your beautiful words move me in so many ways. I feel you have given me a vision of what things can be like if you try hard enough. It doesn't have to be perfect, it just has to have love. Thank you.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 31 . 7/13/2013
It is the way that one could expect Jasper to feel after all the emotional overload, the physical strain he has been through with Edward. It is a gut reaction that really was separate from what a calm, ordered thinking mind would have come up with.
I am sure that when the nerve storm has passed and Jasper and Edward can think and speak rationally to each other then perhaps the outcome might be different.
And if this is all it takes to break them up, this thing, the first truly devestating emotional crisis in their relationship, then it is best they part. If this is all it took, then they had nothing in the first place.
I wait with interest to see what happens.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 30 . 7/13/2013
You made it totally real, Edward's desolation just poured forth, my heart breaking for him. You are beyond wonderful in your talent, your imagination. Thank you for such a great read yet again.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 29 . 7/13/2013
The description of Jasper's feelings and thoughts as he ran his race was nothing short of brilliant. I felt as I was there, being inside his head as things churned over. You've done it again, you raised the bar yet again. Loved every word. Thanks.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 28 . 7/13/2013
Once again perfection rolls from your keyboard. I don't know how you do it, but just when I think it can't get any better reading than this, you up the bar yet again. Loved every word. You describe Edward's black depression and fears so realistically, it's hard to believe you can channel him so well and make me care about two imaginary figures so much. Thank you.
| Pink Bead Girl chapter 27 . 7/13/2013
Gosh, things are happening thick and fast! So many new things, wedding rings and piercings and all manner of wonders. Great read as usual, you are a genius at making emotions soar to the sky and back, you make love the most important thing in the world. Thank you.