Reviews for If on a Winter's Night
Gubefan1980 chapter 20 . 4/30/2016
Seriously, you are givingme a fucking heart attack. Damn I was just going to say I trolled IMDb for pictures of Jasper the youngest I could find was 2005 when he was in Criminal Minds at age 21 Just to get a better "minds eye" of a closer to 17 yo then you had to do that are you insane? I'm 72, yeah seriously, I'm gonna ave a heart attack before this story ends.
Gubefan1980 chapter 18 . 4/30/2016
That was a,beautiful chapter, so gla. Edward decided to ck out the basketball pace, fuck hawt smaexy scene in truck I'm afraid edward will give up the idea because of the cost. I hope, fingers crossed, that this doesn't set him back.
Gubefan1980 chapter 15 . 4/29/2016
That was so beautifully and sensitively written just so touching I loved it. Uh oh, well Jasper will 'splain I saw two of the movies mentioned but not TBC. Yes, '80s produced some great work out music
Gubefan1980 chapter 14 . 4/28/2016
That was so beautifully written tender funny smexy poignantand oh so wonderful love their relationship, love how Jasper stayed and pushed and prodded never giving up on Edward on their love. Fty a bit of Beatles trivia, despite being called the White Album because duh its white the actual title is The Beatles.
Gubefan1980 chapter 11 . 4/28/2016
I'm pretty sure I read something bout Viagra several chapters ago and Edward was really freaked out about the idea great chapter Jessica and Bella are soooo annoying
Guest chapter 10 . 4/28/2016
I know this story is woven around Beatles songs, which I really love,, but I hope you don't mind this "Remember those walls I built, well baby they're tumbling down and they didn't even put up a fight I found a way to let you in But I never really had a doubt, standing in the light of your halo, I've ggot my angel now." Haveto take a bit of a break, the angst is crushing. More so than Mergers Acquisitions
Gubefan1980 chapter 7 . 4/28/2016
That was a tough chapter to read. Poor boys they love each other so much but they have a tough road ahead of them I'm glad jasper laid down the law with maybe he needed bullying to get his life back on track I just have one question I was under the impression that Edwards father is a physician, why does he keep calling him Mr. Cullen instead of Dr. Cullen even in personal settings people would still use his title. Glad Edward got the shaking up he needed. Maybe the codfling was ggetting on his nerves, reminding him he's an invalid.
Gubefan1980 chapter 5 . 4/28/2016
This is a tragically beautiful story. I feel so bad for both of for his loss, jasper unable to grieve as he would if they could be open about their relationship as well as,the gutwrenching guilt he feels and now Edward's rejection terribly throw the fucking driver in jail to rot.
Gubefan1980 chapter 4 . 4/27/2016
Horrible very tragic I just hope he doesn't get to a point where he pushes Jasper away. Well written if sad story BTW Edward at 6'1" is taller than Jasper's 5'10. love the song I have the album on vinyl not CD. Very old like 40 yr old album
Gubefan1980 chapter 2 . 4/27/2016
From your summary I knew he wasn't dead but I had a feeling he was paralyzed. Love the weaving of Beatles words throughout narrative
Gubefan1980 chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
Great but then not so great beginning. Poor Jasper what happened to Edward?
Guest chapter 32 . 3/3/2016
Brilliant!
can't find epilogue
beeg chapter 32 . 1/28/2016
hello,

i am a great fan of your stories. I have finished reading this story and really enjoyed it. I see that you have indicated that a epilogue will follow. I understand that life happens, but is there a epilogue that was written that you can send to me - or if you are still planning to add the epilogue to the story. Thanks for writing such a great story.
Comrade'sRoza chapter 32 . 1/19/2016
Amazing! One of the best I have ever read and I loved how far the boys have come from the days before the accident!
Ariadne.99 chapter 32 . 1/13/2016
Pleeeeeease! Epilogue!
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