Reviews for If on a Winter's Night
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 30 . 7/31/2014
Kind of disappointed in Jasper blowing off his parents after the race. They were proud and wanted to share in the joy of his achievement.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 29 . 7/30/2014
Yah congrats to Jasper. He did the race.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 26 . 7/29/2014
Well ofc he's gay. Oh I wonder how Jasper's going to take it.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 24 . 7/28/2014
Awwww too sweet. Fantastic chapter.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 22 . 7/25/2014
Why can Edward follow Jasper to OSU?
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 20 . 7/24/2014
Oh no
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 18 . 7/23/2014
Oh poor Edward. This isn't going to sit well with him and he was just making good progress too. *sigh*

Sry I'm not commenting on every chapter. Most times that's only because I'm in too much of a rush to get to the next chapter and see how things play out.
This is an amazing story and I'm enjoying it.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 14 . 7/21/2014
Fantastic chapter.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 12 . 7/20/2014
Love your jasper. LOVE HIM
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 9 . 7/20/2014
Perfect use of the last line. I always did like that.
My heart goes out Jasper. He has such courage.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 8 . 7/19/2014
Wow powerful chapter.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 7 . 7/19/2014
Oh thank the gods Edward texted.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 5 . 7/18/2014
My this just sad and heart reaching. I just want to hold them both.
AlwaysAnAussie chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Wow what a first chapter. And thx for the tip in the AN at the end.
Guest chapter 32 . 7/1/2014
What a disappointment! 500k words and nothing but repeating chapters (75 % repeating dialogue and description ) of the same events disguised as dual POV. Such a,shame. A beautiful story and good writing ... No epilogue and there was so much more story to tell... That the author lead us to believe would be told. Oh we'll... Just so disappointing after all the time invested in these characters...
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