Reviews for Revenge Is Sweeter
SERGIUS2277 chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
Woaaah. You're an awesome writer, always keeping me on the edge of my seat.
1valleygirl4 chapter 4 . 6/22/2011
ok so i have three guesses

1) he overshadowed an unconcious Danny

2) He threatened to hurt Danny's family

3) He got that dude who can change into people to say it.
Nimrod The Writer chapter 4 . 6/21/2011
Yay! An update! :D I wasn't disappointed, of course. There are a few grammar mistakes, but those don't bother me, especially when your writing is so beautifully descriptive and juicy! This was a very realistic chapter. You did a great job with it! I'm dying to know what Vlad is planning. It seems pretty intricate, which is fantastic! :D
Dark Hunter of the Forbidden chapter 4 . 6/20/2011
I LOVVVVEEEEEEEEEE THIS SONG! Can't wait what happens next. I truthfully have no idea. XD
Deyinel chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
This is really good. I think you write for Vlad very well, and Danny isn't bad either. I like the amount of description you put in, while still keeping your mysteries regarding Vlad's plan. ;) I also like how manipulative Vlad is. Very well done all around!

Update soon, please!
destroythisaccount chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
xXxMartelxXx chapter 3 . 12/6/2010
So, after reading the lyrics to the song, and the last part of this chapter, I'm guessing that Vlad finally lost his sanity and his obsession with Maddie is to blame? Or something? _

I'm still surprised with all the flair you added in the description of each mundane action, and how it tied to Vlad's emotions and plans, that elegance and symbolism is so what I would expect from Vlad's mind.
Nimrod The Writer chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
Hooray! An update! :D

Despite its shortness, it was still incredibly fun to read. Vlad is very chilling in this story, which is the best cause crazy!Vlad is intimidatingly awesome. The dialogue between him and Danny was exactly how I imagined it would go, too. You did a great job on this chapter, and I can't want to read more about Vlad's plans for Danny. :D

Excellent job!
liz chapter 2 . 9/29/2010
amazing story!

please update soon!

aliengirlguy chapter 2 . 9/23/2010
your story is intriguing, please keep it up!
Miko Vampire chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
I can't wait to see what Vlad does now that he has HIS LITTLE BADGER right where he wants him!

criminalxxxmindsxxxfreak chapter 2 . 8/18/2010
Hi :) Love the story so far. Great prologue, great 2nd chapter... You did a fabulous job writing the characters, they all seem in character to me. And the plot is interesting. Very interesting.

This is first DP fic I've read (though I've watched the show since the beginning) I'm more of a Criminal Minds fan, and a few odd Harry Potter fics, but I was curious, found this and I've gotta say, I love it! :) It makes me miss the show all over again... Looking forward to more, update soon :)
Nimrod The Writer chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
Whoo! Confrontation! I love it!

:D :D :D I want to take the time to thank you up and down for your very kind shout out! I was tickled to death when I saw that! I'm so glad you like Domination! It's insanely fun to write, if not occasionally sickening. And I suppose the chapters in Vlad's PoV will be nice little treats then. :) I wish I could write in third person, but I'm just no good at it.

And now, to the review!

So I definitely enjoyed this chapter. You took the time to give us a smooth background of where Danny's at in life while simultaneously keeping us entertained with interactions between his friends and sister. You hit the nail on the head with Jazz wanting to be overprotective and Danny letting her but secretly not, too! :) The last part was absolutely chilling, in light of the prologue! I'm not ashamed to say I was squealing like a little girl cause Vlad's freaking awesome. Especially when he's portrayed so excellently. The pace is moving right along, but isn't too fast. It makes me excited for the later chapters! :D The only thing I would point out to work on is grammar. Other than that, great chapter!

And I can't -wait- for the next one! Cliffies with Vlad always lead to all kinds of awesome. XD Thanks again for reading, enjoying, and advertising my stories! I am honored, my friend!
Everwild chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
Oooh! The suspense! Can't wait for the next chapter.
xXxMartelxXx chapter 2 . 8/5/2010
... That was a very sad chapter. It was even sadder after reading the lyrics to the song. D: *reads genre label* Oh, Drama. Of course. That explains that.

I like how you took time to explore Jazz and Danny's relationship, and the impact Danny Phantom had on Jazz's life.

And you completely took me by surprise! Two times! I thought Jazz was going to get kidnapped or something while Danny slept, but nooo, you made him act smart (I like that) and try to follow her, and then when I was expecting for Jazz to run into trouble only for Danny to try to save her (and possibly fail, to add more tension), you have Danny's 'follow my sister and keep her alive'-plan jarringly interrupted. It was unexpected, and yet it all fit so well! I'm very impressed.
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