Reviews for Oscillate
Discordant Concordia chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Oh my god. WHY I took this long to discovering and reading this gem is beyond me, but I am certainly glad that I found it. This was simply beautiful! Wonderfully written piece indeed. I love all the imagery and details you put into it, but at the same time kept the story going without making it drag on pointlessly. Fantastic work! :) Definitely going into my favorites.

anon77777777777777 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Such amazing, beautiful, descriptive writing.

I hope you don't mind me saying that this was my favourite was this sentence 'to meticulously strip away every last inch of his business persona for her so that she can feel the four-chambered muscle under his a hundred percent pure cotton shirt and know that every atrium, every ventricle, every valve belongs to her.'

Such a clever and original way to express such a universal theme! I really loved the last sentence too. Just a really beautiful story, can't wait to read more of your fics.
eucalyptus chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Oh my word. That was so lovely, it hurts.
xparamorexbabex chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
oh wow this story is just..breathtaking! its perfecct exactly the way it is and i will most likely read it over and over! thank you sooo much!
Abby L chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Beautiful, amazing, wonderful...I can go on, but I think you get the picture. :) Your writing is fantastic and very descriptive (but not in an overbearing sort of way). The ending was heartwarming, and your description of how their relationship differs from Cobb's and Mal's simply took my breath away. Bravo! Just an FYI, I'm also stalking your multi-chaptered fic. It is also spectacular!
blackfphoenix chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
this is beautiful. I'm not sure where I just got absorbed into the story but it happened. It's funny because i was thinking of paradoxes earlier and somehow this story just cemented a notion I had about Ariadne and Arthur. I especially like your Art and Practicality don't belong together so both must go. I related to it a lot. it's a great oneshot. I alos enjoy your Matryoshka story. keep up the good work.
Eternally hibernating chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I just watched Inception and when I got home, I was thinking that for the next whole week I would be hooked on ArthurAriadne - practically drowned on it. And to my joy, I have found a GREAT fic worthy of this lovely pairing. I love this.

ArthurAriadne is meant to be. I am even more sure of that after reading your fic. Thank you for writing this.

cian rhyme chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I loved this so much. Everything about it, every single thing. The way you laid out the story, the way you wrote the characters, and the building at the end.
Twilo chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Hekkiq chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
I love the imagery at the end, it's amazing and perfect.
Arugula Pacioli chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
I liked it:D thank you for this!
istandcorrected chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
This was wonderful.I really enjoyed the pacing and the way you laid out this story. I anxiously await the fic you're outlining. Thank you for writing.
AngelofDarkness1605 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
I enjoyed reading your story very much and I hope that you'll post more Arthur/Ariadne fics in the near future :)
Specificitydarling chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
this was wondeful! I loved it, especially the ending! so beautifully done :)
Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Loved it. Especially the part at the end. I liked that they have their own balance and dynamic, they're not just another Dom and Mal who lost themselves in each other.

Thanks for posting. I hope you'll write more.

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