Reviews for Thin Line Between Love and Hate
jk chapter 31 . 2/15
why would anyone want to be with you bella? you wear shit you saw in music videos and listen to Keisha! You dance around like a whore...and get tattoos and piercings cause you want to be cool ...and we know that's the reason cause of that immature little comment about the hairdresser looking "impressed"...I couldn't believe you wrote that...LOL dumbass
jk chapter 27 . 2/15
first off...Edward can not be forgiven...faking it or not he cheated and theres no going back after that shit.
second...bella is now just like all the other stupid little hoes her age...do I don't see Edward even liking her anymore!
bellas turned into a fucktard
jk chapter 26 . 2/15
OMG LOL did you read the fight scene?
bella sayings. omg I don't even think I can repeat how stupid that shit was...did she say "dat" and "bout"...also "fall back hoe"? omg bella got ghetto stupid.

what the fuck was that about?
jk chapter 25 . 2/15
so if you haven't got it by now...try putting less of your pathetic ass in the story and it will be better...dressing bella up in something you saw in the super bass video? wft? bella being a skank, trying...TRYING to be cool but failing miserably...its so damn pathetic
jk chapter 24 . 2/15
I think bella should not forgive alice, Edward,rose,emmett, or jasper. Personally I think bella should just go live her own fucking life and stop sucking on their tits. they don't deserve forgiveness...plain and simple
jk chapter 23 . 2/15
LOL I danced to a slutty song! an EVERYONE CHEERED FOR ME! ME!

LOL then kiesha came on! LOL HAHAHAHAHAH OMG IM GONNA PEE MYSELF...this is the dumbest chapter yet...hahahahaha

you ever see stupid attention whores being stupid attention whores? you ever read about them? lol sooooooooooo fucking stupid
jk chapter 22 . 2/15
now hes gonna play off the Tanya bullshit...like we were just pretending...pretending or not he still kissed Tanya, held her hand ect ect...that's fucking cheating...doesn't fucking matter why he did it just that he did!
bellas shit is a different story...she was forced
jk chapter 21 . 2/15
now bellas gonna be a mother fucking cheerleader? what the fuck is going on here? did someone take over your story? and they happen to be like 13-15?
jk chapter 20 . 2/15
whats with all these new people your bringing into the story..that no one gives one flying fuck about?
lexi,amy. ,kyle? none of them mean shit to this story...I don't get it. if you want to write about immature fucktards that have "problems" why not write a separate story...thought this was the twilight characters
jk chapter 18 . 2/15
I'm alittle surprised that Edward didn't kill the bitch that set it all up...

did bella seriously tell kyle she loves him? how fucking embarrassing!
jk chapter 16 . 2/15
well now we all know this fic was written by a immature child...you have bella cutting and dying her hair, getting a tattoo and piercing...LOL and let me guess Edwards jaw will drop and think bellas soooo hot...LOL you stupid little shit. God do kids really think like this?
jk chapter 10 . 2/15
so that guy was just hanging around the cullens house? yaaaaa oooookkk

why isn't bella fucking pissed that Edward cheated on her? cause that's exactly what the fuck he did!

Edward can fuck off and die...seriously. I hate him so much Tanya can have his ass
harkie5 chapter 33 . 1/12
Great story!
Guest chapter 33 . 12/28/2015
KEEP WRITING!
Guest chapter 21 . 11/28/2015
This is a good story, you should be an author
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