Reviews for Talking
AiMila chapter 1 . 6/18/2016
That's it? I was just starting to enjoy Jasper's sadistic streak!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
You should use flames to make s'mores. Great story, btw.
Whatwhy chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
One word:SMEXY! Damn this was hot! Henry is so cute! He acts so innocent in this and you matched their characters perfectly! So sad the show had to end -_-. Great job on this fic though!

-your fellow fanficer? Whatwhy peace -
Kalypso Fox chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Omg, I sooo wanna read the rest about their night of Henry's 'punishment'! xD
Jill .E. Napier chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Fantastic! Amazing! Very Smexy! love it! love it!
Miss Regina Star chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Zetta hot!

By the way, I'm thirteen years old and I think that it was completely RIGHT and awesome.

Does that make me a pervert?
hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Awesome story! I loved it! D
iyfanatic chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Loved it! I think you did a marvelous job with this fic. Out of the very limited number of Jasper/Henry fics on this site, I think you've written the most believable story. Your plot was simple but effective, and the way you characterized both of the guys was perfect. Kudos XD
Swiping Monocles chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I.. I think I love you. :D

You captured the moment(s) very nicely, you have amazing grammar, and that was the most amaing half-smut ever


Also, I THOUGHT I WAS ALONEEEE when I was watching this show I was like "OMG YAOI."

alexis chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
fuck that, I think this is a wonderful way to introduce yourself to the site!~

loved this fic btw, maybe youll write another one in the near future? ;)
fox gal chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Oh I love it! And I think this is a lovely way to introduce yourself to this wonderful site! your the only person to write a Jasper/Henry fic that actually has Japser on top! (I like him on top ) no one else seems to know that when you write the pairing that way first person listed tops. Anyway I love this story! I hope you write more for this pairing
number1sasunarufan chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
wow i loved it, it was so hot
WalkingMisery chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
LOL! Ur right! It isn't the best introduction, but ur story is still awesome! XD
jessica499499 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Awesome! It was so wonderfully written!Be sure to write more of this pairing please!
Basilisk Ishikir chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
I think its a wonderful way to introduce yourself to the site! I have some things,

1. Henry, though CN wont mention it, probably had sexual incounters before, due to different customs in different areas, and he was in India and South Asia..I think so, monks are mostly in Mountains, and he probably read Kama Sutra while in India or south asia. That is my opinian, due to the fact that he could read it in america but to really get the "spiritial" feeling, he probably got that.

2. A few spellings, just some switched words, or loss of a letter, but other that that, AMAZING!
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