Reviews for In My Life
Alverdine chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
The way you create this micro-cosmos of sorrow and pain within 4 nicotine stained walls is incredible. And the pier is like an excursion into another world. A more hopeful one. Opening Edward's heart and mind to freedom and opportunity. In addition I loved how this wasn't angst for angst's sake and that - sad as it was - it had a beautiful silver lining.

Thank you for sharing :)
sakari-x chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
This is so good, hope you do continue! Thanks for sharing.
sydneytwilightmum chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
I really really liked it!

I loved their relationship and how you set it up and had it played out. I'd be completely happy if you didn't continue it, but would be rather interested to see where it went.

Lilacs46 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
This was heart-wrenching. Poor Edward. Even worse, poor Bella. Because of what Tanya did, Edward may never be able to fully put his trust in a woman. And if you don't have trust, you don't have anything.
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I enjoyed this and found the couple intriguing
ecxe chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
definitely continue. i would love to see edward confront tanya, and to have him come to terms with the hurt she caused him by taking that decision away from him.
Kimmydonn chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Oh wow. I'm not going to touch you on the abortion thing. That was Tanya's choice, and she made it. Bittersweet. I love that. Okay, now I need chocolate...
glitteratiglue chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Can I just say, WOW. That was beautiful, bb - skilfully written as always. Edward's pain is so finely drawn, and it was so sad, the situation. Their friendship was so sweet, the way she cares about him and sees him as her friend because he comes in there so much.

Poor Edward! :( I loved the idea that he was sharing a piece of himself with her, and vice versa - I guess that's what true friendship is. If this is incoherent I apologise, I'm so freaking tired I can barely see straight.

It was just gorgeous though, thankyou for sharing. 3 xxx
pilotnana chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
OMG! I remember reading this a while ago, and I never left a review or knew it was you *facepalm*

I love it! love it so much that I m not ashamed to beg for more. There's something about this two characters that demands to have a continue have to tell their story..pretty pleeeasee.. If not, still is one amazing O/S.

I love you, and your writing 3
PiedPiperOSIB chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
I really enjoyed this! The writing was beautiful and the story really touched me. I would love to see this expanded. Thank you for posting this.