Reviews for She and Her
BadeLuvScissorLuv chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Dang dude! You play with your words A LOT!
Ameha Kay chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
i liked it...especially her intense hatred of trina :-D
breathecalifornia chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
*OMJ* i looooooooooove this! fab fab fab
Imnotablackchicka-Imjustachick chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
it was a little annoying because of the random words in brackets plus I just plain didn't like it
Eletrickkid chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
It was a pretty good story, I loved it
DarkAngel109 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
only one error. Liz Gillies (Jade)'s eyes are blue. like, veerrry blue.
other than that
[one/singular/only/1]
mistake it was
[good/excellent/enjoyable/pleasant]

the writing style was a little
[difficult/challenging/hard]
to read but it took effort to understand, kind of
[like/similar to/resembling]
Jade. so, yeah. it was greAt. i 3love E. they are so aMaZiNg together.

xox*o,
DarkAngel109
slfjglfkjgflkjg chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
you should make a second chapter but make it Tori/Jade pairing and make them kiss.
Beck's Sweetheart chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
just curious, why did you put all those synonyms? just wondering. but other than that i loved it and it was perfect!

P.S. I'm also Griffin's Sweetheart
withflyingcolors chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Awww, I liked that. I mean, it's Beck and Jade. It doesn't get much better than that.

~Sophie
redacted357123123462 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I liked it (: I love your writing style.

I only noticed one error; Jade (Elizabeth Gillie)'s eyes are blue.

Otherwise, it was really good (:
AvidReaderAshley chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! Great great great job!
K9GM3 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
It wasn't boring... Bit of a mind-screw, actually.

But pretty good.
Falcon226 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Oh, goodness this story made me dizzy. You got in touch with Jade pretty well, but the style was just so hard to read. You could have accomplished a lot with just italics and maybe bold, since the strange spacing and numbers (what?) gave me a slight headache.

Oh. And Jade has blue eyes, not brown~ I thought they were brown for a while, myself.
llllllllllllllllllll chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Pretty good. I thought the writing was creative, but distracting. I applaud you for being bold, but I wouldnt do it again. BTW, thanks for being a Bade shipper. And keep writing! :)