Reviews for Living Hell
zoeyredbird23 chapter 12 . 3/31/2013
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Guest chapter 12 . 10/29/2012
its good!
Mockingjay205 chapter 12 . 10/29/2012
Need to know what happens next. You left us on a cliffhanger
Guest chapter 12 . 10/13/2012
screw james he's the worst bf ever i hope bella finnaly tells edward her feelings
L Christine chapter 12 . 10/13/2012
O. M. G.! I LOVE your story and was sooo excited to see a new chapter! In the beginning when I started reading your story originally, I kind of wondered what had happened to sort of set James off, after she had described how shy and sweet and everything he was. This really answered my question. I don't know what you're planning but my money is on drugs, possibly steroids since it seems like his mood and behavior changed so quickly and so much. I know people who take steroids usually have a really short fuse and an itchy trigger finger. (So to speak.) But how does Laurent fit in? And if Bella's father was chief of police, wouldn't she know Laurent if he was on the police force? Unless maybe whatever is going on Laurent is pulling the strings and he just really scares James, who got into (well whatever he's into) and got in way over his head. Maybe that's why he's beating up on Bella? To take out his frustrations on her since he can't do anything about his situation with Laurent? My guess is that Laurent probably isn't a real cop but I just really can't figure out how he fits into all of this. I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! (No pressure) but I can NOT wait!
twilight37 chapter 11 . 9/30/2012
This is so amazing. You need to update soon! You did such a great job capturing all of them emotion and action. Very nicely written! Keep it up. (:
L Christine chapter 11 . 9/16/2012
OMG, what is going to happen next?! I am literally on the edge of my seat and can not wait for the next chapter! Do Edward and Bella finally get together? Does he sleep beside her to keep her safe and protected? Is he going to stay out of school with her and spend all that time with her for the next few days? Does James show back up?! All good questions, and I NEED TO KNOW THE ANSWERS! LOL. (It may be possible I'm too into this story but I can honestly tell you I really do not care even a little bit...I. Am. Hooked.) Will be checking back frequently for the next installment...CAN"T WAIT!
L Christine chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
I found your story by accident but I have to tell you, I. Am. Hooked. LOL. I love the whole story so far but I have to tell you that honestly, my favorite part so far is how you're utilizing and describing Emmett. He's honestly probably one of my favorite characters from the books (other than Edward and Bella obviously haha) but I love his cuddly bear of a big brother nature and I love that you're using him in the story that way. I hate how annoying Bella is being about James but unfortunately I'm aware that sadly it's a pretty realistic description so I don't fault the story or you lol. I'm pretty excited that I'm only halfway through and I can not wait to see what happens next so with that, I bid you ado and will continue to the next chapter.
gabby11234 chapter 11 . 9/9/2012
So I just read your story and its so good, I cant wait to read more
JustAnotherScribbler chapter 11 . 9/9/2012
Laurent!
Oh no..that can't be good, and what was up with that asshole doctor?
harleymaria chapter 11 . 9/8/2012
oo cannont wait for the next chapter update soon please
DevilishAngel78 chapter 11 . 9/8/2012
Please update soon! I am enjoying the story line!
Live To Ride chapter 11 . 9/8/2012
Yay! An update. :)
Cattinson chapter 10 . 8/16/2012
Omr this story is killing me ! Please update agAin sooon !
bbgo3 chapter 10 . 8/15/2012
love itt!
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