|Reviews for Harry Potter & the Curse's Cure|
| MikerG chapter 47 . 3/12
Thanks for the update and I did appreciate the interlude.
I've re-read you whole story from the start and it really comes together well. I was struck by something this time though. Are the Van Dorts, Victor and Emily, some kind of "changed" vampire? I think there is much more to them than meets the eye.
| A Fan chapter 1 . 3/9
This story is well written, and holds the reader captive in the details and the action, as well as emotional story's and situation. You have create a delicate balance between evil and good, acceptance and rejection. You add layers of meaning to mistakes, and give send a picture that you can always go back and do the right thing.
The love scenes are amazing, I wish they were a bit longer, but thats a normal opinion really, it shows how well you made it flow. I read much of this on the other sight you posted it on, so that one was probably more Rated MA. However, both ones are written well and fun.
Please update soon, your writing is superb, and I really hate reading many other fics, they just seem so dull and boring.
Anyways, sorry I am not logged in, I might later.
Great story :D
| Darkerfox chapter 1 . 3/7
"That action proved her loyalty, hence why she ended in Hufflepuff."
It's better to say, "Her commitment to her promise proved her loyalty, which was the reason she ended up in Hufflepuff."
"Protego", not "Protoego"
| azrael-rose chapter 23 . 3/7
What's up with the Van Dorts? They refer to things that happened to Harry's great grandfather as if they remember them personally, but don't appear to be more than middle aged. Even with extended magical lifespans that's not likely, so what's going on?
Are they vampires or flesh golems or elves or what?
| imgonnadie chapter 47 . 3/4
| hubriswriter chapter 47 . 3/3
Picking nits...Chardonnay is a white grape, the juice of which makes a white wine.
Odd, but interesting update.
| Dragon and Sword Master chapter 47 . 3/3
I have to admit that this was quite interesting, and it's always nice to see a scene from a different point of view. It's a nice touch *nods*
| xan-merrick chapter 47 . 3/3
great interlude can't wait for new cure chapters
| kelwin chapter 24 . 3/3
I have to say this. this may be not what your aiming for but it sounds like harry does not have any voice in what is been done. think about this he is the lord of the manner. what he says goes no matter what the girls think or want. now harry is not like that but your putting it like they rule and trundle him out oevery now again to say well scripted words. I quote they will be a while lets us go and discus it. also the girls are heirs to families that are almost royal and I don't see them jumping on to people and start kissing them. it seams a little demeaning. Hermione seams to be the one deciding everything when where how and why it will has no noble name but is ruling those others. this would never be. also when he goes to talk to the greengrass lord he is left to amuse the children while the girl goes off to discuss the contract. surely it should be the lords talking?
| Zikarn Krais chapter 46 . 3/2
I'm honestly a little shocked.
Is the Departments so mired in bureaucracy that even though Amelia went to them months ago, the nest still exists?
You even mentioned how terrified they were. Apparently not enough to actually do something about it?
| kelwin chapter 17 . 3/2
also why do people who write harry multy naturly think just because they are sharing harry they should be a little by and start kissing each other. that just does not suddenly come on but I feel it takes away from the fic. I must say I like the idea of molly being found out.
| kelwin chapter 12 . 3/2
a few things I want to bring up. this is not flaming but just a few things I would like to check about. 1 harry seams very weak. if he had been abewsed all of these years it woulde either make him stronger or go down the road that voldemort has done like others in history. 2 if harry did not ask about it Hermione would not have talked it over with him. surely harry and her should have talked first about sharing and not when ever he asks about it. that to me stinks of distrust and wanting to get there own way and oh just say it would be good for harry. I my self would only be happy with 1 girl and all of this about males liking girls get at it well not me. 3 they are thinking a summer of studying and they are ready to face voldemort. I don't think that would be possible. voldemort would have forgotten in his life more spells and magical knollige than they could fit in to 10 years of just constent learning spells. it would take someone who not only has been trained in combat over a few years but luck a large spell list they can call on. this is what j k did not do right she had wizards who are more powerful and know a lot more been taken down by a few fifth years think of it like this the sas getting taken down by a few fifteen year olds. I must say it is a good read but a few points are just making it a little hard to swallow.
| Mistra Rose chapter 47 . 3/1
What a powerful chapter...I can't wait for more of this story and sorry about your computer.
| WhiteElfElder chapter 47 . 3/1
I like this interlude and it would be good to see how she helped protect Harry while he was growing as another interlude sometime.
| Crossoverpairinglover chapter 47 . 3/1
Nice little change of pace