|Reviews for Harry Potter & the Curse's Cure|
| PGHammer chapter 7 . 1/3/2011
The consequences of Harry's Cure (and Draco's Curse) become more evident far AND wide (from the girls themselves, to Draco, to - of all people - *Bellatrix Lestrange*, and possibly Riddle as well, if not Nagini). Narcissa and Bellatrix plan their escape as well. (Rather amusing that Narcissa stole a line from Yoda ("The Empire Strikes Back"), considering how most purebloods in general hate most anything Muggle.)
| Bladre MKT chapter 6 . 1/3/2011
WOW no you didnt! XD a hickskicker guide joke? XD so 42 is the anwser to how many times can HP cum? ok... how does that solves life univers and everything else? XD well go to finish the fic!
| shurtugal88 chapter 12 . 1/3/2011
very nice chapter; good job. for some reason the goldbag goblin just makes me think of teabag and teabaging somebody ROTFLMAO, keep up the good work and update as soon as possible!
| Patrick Nakasone chapter 11 . 1/2/2011
I just realized that Dumbledores belief in a rigid caste structured society is very Victorian. Give a bought the time he was born this was the common belief at the time. Change is inevitable if a society can no longer maintain at least the tolerance of the majority population in its structure. Unfortunately a true test of the wizardry world society is coming the old power groups are dieing off and they are not going to give up power quietly. Can the wizarding world adjust to the changes or will it be destroyed?
| chm01 chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
that's an interesting mental image to have around... Thanks A LOT! (insert shit eating grin here)
| Edmond O'Donald chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
A very good, thoughtful chapter. I particularly liked the bits between Hermione and her mother, as I thought they were not only accurate and honest, but written in a fashion that was completely at peace with what you had done up until that point. I also liked what you had Bill Weasley do. That was good stuff and again, honestly written. I look forward, therefore, to your next chapter. I get the feeling that once Sirius' will is read, the shit will hit the fan and that there will be a confrontation between Harry and Dumbledore.
Please - don't stop writing! I am really, really enjoying this.
| Paladeus chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
Gah! The chapter was short! But, you tend to update with decent speed, I suppose, so it works.
I still miss Luna amongst them, though.
It's nice to see the girls trying to attract Harry with their feminine wiles. That's always fun... Like the girls are hunting and the prey is too stunned to notice.
Bill was a strange situation, along with everything there. I find myself curious that they didn't ask Bill what he knew or his opinion on the matter since it was more Gringotts related than Order.
The conversation with Hermione's mom was interesting. A part of me is curious about the woman's point of view, though.
Only two dislikes were mentioned. Length and Luna (the last, I know, is just preference and your own are noted - I just miss her in this for some reason.)
One thing I'm curious about, though, is why you selected THOSE girls, specifically. Daphne, I can kind of understand. Slytherin. Susan, though? I don't understand that, too much. Though, I'm appreciating the "one girl from each house" bit you've got going.
| Ninpou chapter 12 . 1/2/2011
| TyDragon30 chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
I am really getting into this story and cannot wait to see what
Harry and the girls do to Dumbledore and the Durslys not to mention Hermione's mother. I also cannot wait for the will reading at Gringotts, ARE YOU PLANNING SOMETHING if so good on
you I 3 it.
| HP Fan 36 chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
I love this story, every chapter has been great. Keep it up, update soon please.
| gypsyassassin chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
awesome story, though i'm starting to wonder about what's going to happen with bill, there ... good work.
| Dain chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
Quote: "I never said Dumbledore was 'Good'. Just that he's not 'Evil', ie act for his own gain."
Well, then we have different opinions on the definition of evil. In my opinion, you can be evil without aiming to enrich yourself somehow. In fact, what we humans consider to be the worst acts of evil in history were often committed by people who didn't gain anything at all out of it, but out of different motivations like hate - or even just following orders.
I'd say that someone is evil when he intentionally commits crimes. Or when he deliberately causes harm or destruction. Or perhaps even better: when he violates the ethics/moral code of his society. And that Dumbledore does on all counts.
I'm nearly 100% certain that Vernon is actually the director of Grunnings, not only a factory manager. Many fanfics have him in a lower ranking position to make it possible for Harry to get him fired as an act of revenge, but according to canon, Vernon is an entrepreneur, in control of his own medium-sized company (not that many words were ever lost on his job). Depending on how large and successful Grunnings really is (our only source is that of a braggart, after all), I don't think that there is any chance that the food bill could make a serious dent in his salary (not to forget the ever-popular bonus payments). The same for the cars: If Vernon really has a new car every six months, what happens with his old ones? The very fact that Vernon goes through so many cars seems like a sure sign that he has an arrangement of some sort, perhaps with Grunning's company car pool. He is probably driving the newly bought models before they are added to the fleet.
What I'm trying to say is: Your points about the Dursley's lifestyle seem to be relatively weak proof of something fishy going on. There could be many mundane explanations and I don't think that Hermione would find anything suspicous about Vernon on the merit of those few facts alone. If the Dursleys are really embezzling Harry's money, then I'd expect something much more drastic.
In fact, it may be my different interpretation of the social status of a "director" or even manager, but I think the whole situation is exactly reversed: I find it suspicous that Vernon, owner of an industrial enterprise, lives in such a modest home and neighbourhood - even though he is a complete show-off. Maybe the blood wards keep the Dursleys there against their will? Instead of just being mindlessly, stupidly evil, the Dursley's resentment of Harry may actually have a cause...
I hope you don't mind my nitpicking. For me it's sadly always easier to comment about something I disagree with than complimenting the pieces I like. The fact that I feel passionate enough about your story to review it means that I enjoyed your fic so far. :)
| S-Wanderer999 chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
A nice chapter although I'm imagining Harry's and Hermione's reaction if it is announced Fleur is betrothed to Harry. I do hope Harry with the goblins help is able to get the money back from the Dursleys and also able to punish Dumbledore in some manner for his complete failure in his duties as a guardian (since he disbelieved Harry and others who saw how Harry was treated based on his misguided perception of Petunia).
I think Harry will enjoy the shopping trip even if he will be highly embarassed (I'm thinking of the girls dragging him into a lingerie store). Also I think that Hermione would take the time to help broaden Susan's and Daphne's knowledge of the muggle world and culture, while letting Harry get to enjoy things that he's only heard or watch Dudley do.
Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.
| Irishfighter chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
| kidderz90 chapter 12 . 1/1/2011
Very enjoyable once again. A couple of typos but they're to be expected without a beta. Again a bit of movement in the plot making me very excited about the next update. Provided it'll at least involve shopping and maybe even the will reading?