|Reviews for Harry Potter & the Curse's Cure|
| griffin blackwood chapter 47 . 3/1
Good job and über cute
| zzzzzz1002003 chapter 47 . 3/1
i liked it was a good break in the story.
however its been what 3 months. yes computers have problems backups are needed flash drives mainly are cheap and useful.
| starboy454 chapter 47 . 3/1
| jupimako chapter 47 . 3/1
Computer problems are the worst. Thank you for posting this! It was great. I hope things go smoothly and you're able to continue Cure sometime soon.
| The Blind Dragon chapter 47 . 3/1
Hey, this is the perfect back story to what happened to Lily in this story, whether or not you intended it as a stand alone. It definitely shows us, the reader, how Lily ended up with Harry for all of those years and how she survived. It should stay as a part of the Curses Cure, as an interlude.
You might want to tweak it a bit though, as a flashback or Lily remembering that fateful night standing by a window staring out across the Potter property or something like that when she is truly missing her husband.
| XRaiderV1 chapter 47 . 3/1
this really added to the story I think, I'd wondered what happened with lily while she was in her son's head.
| MariusDarkwolf chapter 47 . 2/28
Very interesting. Quite interesting. Lol kinda wonder if she had a brain side seat at the curing orgy
| rb2312 chapter 47 . 2/28
Nice little bit of lily point of view.
Especially like the last bit.
| D. Page Robin chapter 47 . 2/28
A lovely interlude. I enjoyed it very much. I look forward to the next update.
| Enclave93 chapter 47 . 2/28
great chapter. don't give up on your work :)
| plums chapter 47 . 2/28
This was, at best, an omake.
Doesn't fit in your story at all. At the bare minimum, this should've been ten or fifteen chapters back if you need it. Definitely not now though.
| shugokage chapter 47 . 2/28
This was a very nice one shot thanks!
| Andy chapter 46 . 2/26
Your writing is captivating and just when I think we're headed one way you add a new twist like the aracumantulas! Can't wait for the next instalment!
| LadyPhoenix731 chapter 44 . 2/24
For some reason, I imagine that portrait to look a lot like Pride Rock... ;)
| D. Page Robin chapter 46 . 2/19
Hi Dragon-Raptor. I got done yesterday with your story thus far (A lot of words to read in a day and a half!), and wanted to tell you how much I've enjoyed it. I am newish to the site so I have yet to do much in the way of reviews, let alone any fictions.
I like what you have done with your AU, and how believable I find it. You put your characters into an admittedly extreme position, yet I really don't find that I have to suspend disbelief particularly. As far as the M rating, it is deserved. The story has erotic moments, but is certainly not prurient. While I understand your wish not to have your work bowdlerized, I don't find myself interested in reading the unexpunged version. This version is fine to me.
I really like your new characters, Daniel and Richard. They are great additions.
The one thing I find irksome is that the copy proofing is of very poor quality. Things just jump out to me, mainly homophones, but also at time simply misused words. In the last few chapters, the following jumped out at me:
It's lose, not loose
It's idly, not idolly, which is not a word
It's roiling, not rolling
various forms of to, too, two
It's wear, not were
Chapter 43 continuity Hannah should not be at the Griffindor table.
It's "they're, not "their"
Chapter 45 "could all with". Work?
It's "fell", not "feel"
Chapter 46. "saw", not "say"
To be fair, I find this endemic in the fics I've read so far. I am not sure what the function of the Beta Readers is suppose to be, but if you wish, I'd be happy to proof chapters and let you know what I find. Should you like that, drop me an email.
I will stop now. I look forward to your next installment.
D. Page Robin