Great Story So Far! iHave To Go To Bed So I'll Finish Tm!

Well, I just finished reading the entirety of your Sailor Moon work. It took a few weeks, but I enjoyed it all greatly. You did a great job maintaining the cores of the characters while also allowing them room to grow. I was also impressed with the varied obstacles you came up with. It seems there was a different theme, if you will, at the core of each adversary.

I did notice a couple of continuity errors. In Rei's Little Secret, Usagi thinks to herself that she's thirty after being tired out climbing the steps of Hikawa Shrine. The next story in your sequence, Behind the Mask, has her twenty-seven again. Also, Ami has made the switch to private practice in RLS and is back in the hospital in BtM. I would think you listed the stories out of order, but BtM makes explicit reference to the events of RLS, meaning the order should be correct as listed.

In Fear of The Unknown, it was revealed that Michiru dyes her hair and is naturally blonde. However, part of the concept for The Price of Freedom involved Michiru having green hair. The condition Michiru is in when rescued implies a long period of captivity, and yet her hair has not begun to show roots or otherwise lose the dye. You may want to add a throwaway line suggesting the improvement in hair dye in 10 centuries.

The last thing I noticed isn't a story detail, but the choice you made for character filter for Coming Of Age. Chibi-Usa makes perfect sense of course, but Katarina has nothing to do with the story. Did you select the wrong character there?

I am a little curious about the canonical sources you used. I don't remember the detail that made me think it, but for some reason I was thinking this is a hybrid of anime and manga backgrounds, with more from the anime. Is this so? All in all, an excellent set of stories, and I hope for more.

Such a nice and happy ending!

-Haruka was able to overcome her pride and distaste of Yukata.

-The palace and its occupants are safe.

-The sprites will pursue their journey.

-Junelle learned about her mother.

This fic was really great!

And i can see Hotaru is so much like her Haruka-papa!;D

Excellent ending to a most wonderful story. Again, I love the way you thoroughly construct such a deep universe with multiple story arcs and very well rounded characters. Yes, the protagonists (for the most part; Yukata excepted, of course) are not originally yours, but with the way you write for them and describe their personalities and actions and portray their dialogue they might as well be. Absolutely amazing work, and many thanks for writing this and sharing it with us!

As usual, I'm impressed at the complexity of this universe you've created. Very much enjoyed Jun's story, and I hope she goes to Columbia someday and meets Gomez in person.

Wow, what an ending. I'm glad everything worked out for everyone. I feel bad for PallasPalla... But I think she'll be okay. Good work. It was really awesome.

Your writing has become my Saturday morning treat to myself for making it through the week. Thanks!

Very nice chapter. Love trust and faith between friends who are soldiers of the moon and earth.

It was close...

Great job!

Rule Number 1 when faceing The Forces of Crystal Tokyo: Never Mess with Chibi-Usa (Reason: The Wrath of a Mother is more hazardous to your health then facieng a army of Senshi)

I hope Ceres can save the day and Gwin can stop being a scared child. Maybe Helios can help with this situation too.

Shit! They are really in a dangerous situation! Great job!

Things are heating up! I have an idea what good old Palla Palla might be up to ;D Can't wait for next chapter.

Great. Exciting. Cool

At least Michiru was able to talk to Hotaru._ Haruka will stop brooding.

After the colombien, now a bunch of angry sprite. It seems impossible to have a little peace...