|Reviews for Oceanic|
| Paliia chapter 12 . 3/18
Short and sweet. Thank you for sharing :)
| Paliia chapter 11 . 3/18
Hahaha insatiable kids
| Paliia chapter 10 . 3/18
They're so cute
| Paliia chapter 9 . 3/18
Shoo, Lauren lol
| Paliia chapter 8 . 3/18
The beast has awaken? Ok, no lol or yes?
| Paliia chapter 7 . 3/18
The secrecy could bite them in the ass
| Paliia chapter 6 . 3/18
| Paliia chapter 5 . 3/18
| Paliia chapter 4 . 3/18
Ah, they really need to be more open
| Paliia chapter 3 . 3/18
It got a little out of hand, yikes
| Paliia chapter 2 . 3/18
What a great way to shut her up? Lol
| Paliia chapter 1 . 3/18
| Paty4Hale chapter 12 . 2/6
Really? That was the ending? How dare you leave me like this! I was like expecting a more closed ending :) I liked it anyway! Cute story :)
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 10 . 7/22/2020
So what the fuck happend to Jake?
You know, her boyfriend? The guy she very cozy with with? The guy that punched Edward? Like what the fuck... Did you literally forget about a whole character? That's astonishing.
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 8 . 7/22/2020
It's annyoing reading when you Bella be shocked a older chick fucked edward yet she lost it to a older guy... It's like... Be aware of what you are writing..