Reviews for Oceanic
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 10 . 7/22
So what the fuck happend to Jake?
You know, her boyfriend? The guy she very cozy with with? The guy that punched Edward? Like what the fuck... Did you literally forget about a whole character? That's astonishing.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 8 . 7/22
It's annyoing reading when you Bella be shocked a older chick fucked edward yet she lost it to a older guy... It's like... Be aware of what you are writing..
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 5 . 7/22
I think Edward needs to remind Bella she has a boyfriend, cause if he is a ass, what is she?
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 4 . 7/22
Are you kidding me? She smears HOT marsh mello on his face and he gets evens and he gets punched for returning the favor?

It's like he just up and decided to dump her in water... She literally smearing march mella on his face. If he was being a jerk, she was being a bitch.
Literally this Bella and the way you are writing is hypocritical. You want Edward to be the bad guy obviously but Bella has a boyfriend and is provoking Edward.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 3 . 7/22
So rubbing hot marsh mella on his face is fine but dumping her in water is crossing the line? What he fuck ever
Treestar2509 chapter 12 . 4/19
Very fun. Thank you for sharing.
WingsOfEyeliner chapter 12 . 4/12
I loved that last line! Such a cute fast read. Looooved it! Loved these two
drul chapter 12 . 3/7/2019
Great story! I wish there were more chapters!
Thank you :)
NeeNee246 chapter 12 . 3/5/2019
Nice! lol ;)
NeeNee246 chapter 11 . 3/5/2019
All couple-y! lol ;)
NeeNee246 chapter 10 . 3/5/2019
Awww...sweetness! Marking territory! ;)
NeeNee246 chapter 9 . 3/5/2019
So, that went well! lol ;)
NeeNee246 chapter 8 . 3/5/2019
Love DQ Blizzards! Love these characters! ;)
NeeNee246 chapter 7 . 3/5/2019
OMG! ;)
NeeNee246 chapter 6 . 3/5/2019
This is so great I can't stop reading! ;)
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