Reviews for Oceanic
Chilly Howdy chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Hey R.A thanks for the share of the new story :o) LOL so Edward is trying to get with Bella but so subtle about it? I think lol Thanks again hun! Chilly x
ksm chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Hmmm...just how is Edward being there with Lauren different than Bella being there with Jake?
Babette12 chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Ah, I liked it just as much the second time! I thought you were going to post up Session though. Not that I mind this!

FFpassion chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
wow Edward kissed Bella out in the open :)

Can I ask a few questions pls?

Are they 17yr olds? also if your planning on Edward or Bella having relations with someone else can I have a warning pls lol I'm a true canon girl :D

can't wait for more, thank you for the 2 updates.



Sunflowerfields chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Oh, I don't remember this chapter. Jealousy and sexual tension a perfect combination. Bella's one lucky girl.
cusic1981 chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
I love how they kiss each other while their dates are waiting on the shore for them. Can Jake and Lauren see them?
revrag chapter 2 . 7/31/2010 good. I love it.

I wanna kiss Edward too. :)
maria2906 chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
awwwww jealous Edward is love!

But Edward shouldn't have gone there with Lauren if he wants a claim on Bella :P

They are adorable! And I love a feisty Bella! The way you write the little things that show how their relationship has shifted from friendship to something more is amazing as always!
CindyWindy chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
"You know what," he said, pulling me closer and kissing me.

Ah, me likely!
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Oh jeez, Edward. A waterbed? Seriously? I have to laugh at his adorable cheesiness.
my2galspal chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Aw, man. You gonna keep cuttin' out the good parts? Just kidding. Thanks again for sharing your writing.
maria2906 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
awwwww they are cute as hell! I love this phase in a friendship, where they both realize their feelings go beyond the platonic love!

And what a way to find out..on a waterbed hehehehe!
FFpassion chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
welcome back :D

oh I can't wait for more, I like this story so far.

I get the feeling maybe Edward did have feelings or Bella but was holding back cause of their friendship.



CindyWindy chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
What fun- Waterbedward! He's so cute and cocky!

Is this the HS fic you mentioned?
sweetmama77 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
LOL Quirky and funny! Thank you :)
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