Reviews for Visions of Light
AnnaLund chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
really really sweet! I liked it a lot.

Powerful: "Yes," comes his strangled reply. "More than anything in my existence."

we should all be so lucky.

thank you for writing!

LauralHilll chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
What a lovely story.
Haunted Muse chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Beautiful story. From darkness and pain to light and love. Great job.
yogacat chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Beautiful work and some beautiful writing. Your descriptions of her visions for her own life were so gripping.

"My future spreads out before me; these walls and darkness are all I see. "

From horror to love.

Thanks for writing.
evenflo78 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Nice story, and a wonderful plot bunny to work with. Fantastic job. I was enthralled from beginning to end. Good luck in the contest!
faite-comme-moi chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Thank you for choosing the Alice prompt and steering the story toward her HEA with Jasper. I think their story is as full of destiny as Bella and Edward but A&J don't seem to be a popular couple in fic. I've also felt that Alice's story from prior to her change had a lot of potential. I think you did a wonderful job of covering a lot of story in less than 7000 words and you did a nice job fulfilling the prompt. Good luck in the contest!
theladyingrey42 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
You know I think you did an amazing job with this. So excited to see it completed.