WHAT! You have to contiue the story. I have to find out if Erik Night is still in love with her! Oh you know what you should do you should have Erik kiss Zoey and Stark walks in and stark asks what the hell is going on and Erik gets down on one knee and tells Z how much he loves her and how his ready to pledge his life into service to her, and then he asks her to marry him and make him the happies man on the earth. Then you should have a big dule/fight were Erik and Stark have to fight ether to the death or to first broken bone! Oh and Nyx should give Heath his life back and he tries to come back to Zoey so that they may be togter for longer. And of course Klona and Neferet are defeted to the death. And Stevie Rae and her thing life togter in their love and happness. I would love this so much if you though about this. thanks for wrighting it though i loved it a lot.

stupid cliff! write more now! plz im in total suspense

you should so write more...even though awakened comes out soon i so want to read the rest of this because where the hottie erik is involoved there will be trouble!

OMG! this is sooo amazing! i absolutly love this! plz hurry and rite more!

Irene ;)

OMG...another great cliff-hanger...PLZZZZ dont stop writing...this is an awsome way to tell the story...im betting it will be as good as the actual Awakened! :D

hey...i love th chapter nd i think for another POV you should use Stark

please please please dont stop writeing

you are doing a great job i think you should keep stevie rae povs and maybe do a few stark povs

omg. its amazing. update soon

This was great! Almost the same as I imagine happening in the beginning of Awakened! I will read more later sometime, and I'll keep giving you the much-wanted reviews that us fanfictioners crave the most haha :)

Mariah xoxo

This is really good ) But how come you haven't updated for so long? ((

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I really liked this chapter and I am really curious as to what will happen with Erik... Also I like how you incorporated Kalona's side into the whole story, and that your making him the

half-good half-bad character. Continue writing this story... I have a feeling it might be better than the actual book... Even if I haven't read it yet. Speaking of which... Do you know when it comes out?

This was different than others i have read. But worth the read. three and a half stars

yay! new chapter! thank goodness that zoey accepted rephaim. lol i would ask for the credit card to!XD

great story. better than the other awakened stories ive read. plz update soon