Reviews for Awakened |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i cant believe kalona gets off with no charges! still liked the chapter thou it was very interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() kalona was such a jerk at the council meeting. :( haha but update~~~! really good story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I think that you should definitely keep Stevie Rae's POV in it too. If you are going to include a third POV in the story I think it should be Kalona; Only if you want to include him in the story at all, as a half good half bad kind of character. Oh! And have you maybe thought of bringing back Heath into the story? You know, as a surprise twist? I think it could be interesting, and make Aphrodite's vision still possible, which could make Zoey and Aphrodite both a little nervous and unsure of what the future still has in store for them. Just an idea though. Also, you might want to be a little more careful on how you insert Zoey's made up curses. Like using poopie a little too much; tone it down just a tiny bit. Zoey has kind of a really sweet/innocent mannerisms. Over all your story is very interesting and I can't wait till the next chapter. I am especially curious as to what happened to Rephaim and what will happen with the Vampire High Counsel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohhhhh! Aphrodites, and Rephaims PoVs please! that would be so cool! and YES keep Srevie Raes PoV too, it wouldnt be as good without it ) good story keep writing!XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! So far...AWESOME! I came accross your story today & devoured it in a heartbeat. Please continue & don't get discouraged because you are doing a great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter! And I'd really like it if u cud do some from starks pov in future chapters. Btw luv the added stark tattoos |
![]() ![]() This is a cool story, keep it going. i like Zoey's POV the best but i think you should still do Stevie-rae's a little but not to much coz it can get boring. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it please keep the pov of stevie rae and maybe rephaim |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed it! I'm new to this website, so I don't have any stories posted yet but when I do will you please read and review them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another good chappie! I luved the stark and zoey stuff and ur even making it so I don't hate stevie rae! Lol update soon and sry for the late review |
![]() ![]() I LOVE! PLEASE TO BE CONTINUED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWAKENED! this is really cool! i think Rephaim is a good guy and that he will defenatly go ALL good and turn away from his dad. Cant wait to see what your going to do next! |
![]() ![]() i love it specially the last part it was so cute |
![]() ![]() I want to tell you that you're a really good writter. It's the first fic which respect totally the book except that Zoey never curse.I'm eager to read the next chapter and I hope that you'll update soon. XO XO PS: Sorry for my words, I'm frensh and it's a little hard to write and explain correctly what I want to tell ' |
![]() ![]() ![]() ur a very good writer and im very excited to read more of ur story. pleaz update soon |