Reviews for Changing Fate
Echo1994 chapter 4 . 2/22/2012
Brilliant!
Shadowdude333 chapter 4 . 11/21/2011
AWESOME STORY! Please update!
StarofCalamity chapter 4 . 10/8/2011
Add more soon if u can :D
Heavenlywhiteangel chapter 4 . 10/30/2010
Please update! Nice story
SON OF POSEIDON 2118 chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
nice( stupid story)
A Little Tin Boy chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
You repeated large sections of the story 3 times!

Look at this:

"I waited for someone to pipe up. "The Council agrees," Zeus said. "Percy Jackson, you will have one

gift from the gods." "Any gift?" Zeus nodded. "I know what you will ask. The greatest gift of all. Yes, if

you want it, it will be yours. The gods have not bestowed this gift on a

mortal hero in centuries, but, Perseus Jackson if you want, you shall

be mad a god. Immortal. Undying. I waited for someone to pipe up. "The Council agrees," Zeus said. "Percy Jackson, you will have one

gift from the gods." "Any gift?" Zeus nodded. "I know what you will ask. The greatest gift of all. Yes, if

you want it, it will be yours. The gods have not bestowed this gift on a

mortal hero in centuries, but, Perseus Jackson if you want, you shall

be mad a god. Immortal. Undying. You shall serve as your father's

lieutenant for all time." I stared at him. "Um… a god?" "A dimwitted god, apparently. But yes, a god." "Hmm," Ares mused. "That means I can smash him to a pulp as often

as I want, and he'll just keep coming back for more. I like this idea." "I approve as well," Athena said looking at Annabeth. I stared at Annabeth, her face was all pale, and she looked like she

was on the edge of crying. She was trying not to meet my eyes. I

looked away. Suddenly I thought of the Three Fates. I remembered when they

showed me my future, growing old, dying. Choosing to become a god

would let me avoid all of that. I'll be forever 16. I waited for someone to pipe up. "The Council agrees," Zeus said. "Percy Jackson, you will have one

gift from the gods." "Any gift?" Zeus nodded. "I know what you will ask. The greatest gift of all. Yes, if

you want it, it will be yours. The gods have not bestowed this gift on a

mortal hero in centuries, but, Perseus Jackson if you want, you shall

be mad a god. Immortal. Undying. You shall serve as your father's

lieutenant for all time." I stared at him. "Um… a god?" "A dimwitted god, apparently. But yes, a god." "Hmm," Ares mused. "That means I can smash him to a pulp as often

as I want, and he'll just keep coming back for more. I like this idea." "I approve as well," Athena said looking at Annabeth. I stared at Annabeth, her face was all pale, and she looked like she

was on the edge of crying. She was trying not to meet my eyes. I

looked away. Suddenly I thought of the Three Fates. I remembered when they

showed me my future, growing old, dying. Choosing to become a god

would let me avoid all of that. I'll be forever 16. I could protect

everyone that I loved."
ziggystardust1313 chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
like it! update!
JessMusicNote chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
Good story! But don't worry im going to write more than that.

Percy doesn't have to God of something to do with water, Hades, Poseidon and Zeus and all brothers and their each God of something differant.

Rain, Storms, Land. Those things and things to be God of. Great story update soon.
RawritzAmandaz chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
It's good D Hurry up and continue! :o Lol joking, take your time.
imaginethatt chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
Aaaww I feel so bad for Calypso. Poor girl-she can never get a guy :(
imaginethatt chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
This is so amaizng so far!
BookshelfAwesomeness chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
Awesome story! Probably the only 'Percy turning immortal' type story that's actually really good. You did an excellent job on this, and the recent chapter is great. I liked the idea of Percy visiting Calypso. I can't wait to read about Percy's time in his father's palace!
LOST HERO chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
update soon please
asela23 chapter 4 . 8/14/2010
God of heroes or time.
PensiveGirl chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Curious to see what happens next!
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