|Reviews for Love is like falling and falling is like this|
| StelenaClaceLover09 chapter 5 . 6/19/2011
i want more please i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) I Love Bella & Edward together
| CoppertopJ chapter 3 . 4/8/2011
Okay, first off, she has more guts than me. There is no way in hell I would have gone to that club as the 7th wheel. Second, damn, she slapped him. I'm speechless on this point. Let me get back to you on that one.
| sakurarwr chapter 5 . 12/24/2010
Hello and Happy Christmas! I was wondering when you were planning on updating this story. I just finished reading chapter 5 and I'm addicted! Thanks for writing :D
| mommymac0508 chapter 5 . 9/23/2010
Omg I loved it too good please update soon
| 84gemstone chapter 5 . 9/18/2010
Edward in glasses i think i need a cold shower just thinking about it lol
Iloved Alice and this story :o) and lets not forget i my wife
| sadtomato chapter 5 . 9/18/2010
Oh Alice INDEED! Don't you recognize a cry of passion when you hear one, Alice?
That was a tasty little lemon, bb. I loved it! I liked their teasing, too, the tickling and stuff. It felt very natural. Great chapter! :)
| joayla chapter 5 . 9/18/2010
Loved the changes! It read so much better that time round!
Amazing chapter amazing story amazing twin
| joayla chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
Ok so I love it you know that Hun! I love the slight changes ! Ooh we need a Charlie and sue outtake with bella taking edward and Jake and Leah there!
| 84gemstone chapter 4 . 8/25/2010
i love the line when Jacob said "it's not what it looks like"
We all hate Jake for this but what about Leah how could she do that to her soon to be step sister? That's just so wrong.
After walking in on them if he had tried to kiss me i would of slapped him so hard he would wake up a week later.
See now that's what i was talking about lol GO BELLA (Happy Dance)
I like how Edward is not giving up on her and sat outside waiting for her. (how long no one knows.)
| sadtomato chapter 4 . 8/24/2010
OUCH. This broke me, bb:
"Where there was Jacob there was Bella, always. He would never break me like this. Would he?"
This is good, too! V. much sounds like what a boy would say:
""Bella?," Jacob said tentatively. "It's not what it looks like I swear!"
That statement cracked me wide open. What did he think it looked like? Like they were just playing chess or scrabble? Please.
"What do you think it looks like Jacob? Because it looks like you currently have your dick inside another girl!""
WHO IS IT? Tell me. I am one of your Twitter BFFs, I deserve to know! Is it Jacob? It's Jacob, right? Or Leah? Good cliffy. Definitely left me wanting more.
| sadtomato chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
I LOVE this:
"Mental note: stay away from gin around hot British men."
Fucking EXCELLENT chapter! First of all, I love Edward stalking into the bathroom and yanking her out of there when she tries to escape him. That was phenomenal. Secondly, Bella slapping the shit out of him at the end was top notch. I can't wait to find out what his story is.
I have a suggestion. I love your snarky Bella- she has lots of great little comments and asides. Sometimes those get lost in the sentences though because they aren't punctuated. Por ejemplo (this one isn't snarky, just the first example I could find):
"It had been well over a month actually almost two since Jacob and although that situation still stung I had a feeling in my gut that it wasn't the only reason for me not wanting to go."
I feel like this would benefit from some comma action. Maybe a dash or two. Perhaps:
"It had been well over a month- actually, almost two- since Jacob. Although that situation still stung, I had a feeling in my gut that it wasn't the only reason for me not wanting to go."
Please consider when you read this advice that I have no degree in English, writing, etc. What I do when I have longer sentences is read them out loud, and insert commas where I naturally pause. I still get called out on this by betas, though. Anyway, just a suggestion.
| sadtomato chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
Let me just say that your description of Edward here was phenomenal. I'm drooling. BRB, must wipe drool off keyboard.
Back. OK, he sounds v. sexy. Who is this blonde whore? Is sadtomato gonna have to choke a bitch? How dare she rain on Bella's parade when she feels pretty?
At the beginning, you wrote, "I shaved and conditioned my hair," which confused me greatly. Why would you shave your hair and then condition it? Why is Bella shaving her head? Is she having a Britney Spears moment? Eventually I figured out that she was shaving her LEGS (or underarms or lady bits). I was a little confused. :)
| sadtomato chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Oh shit! I know exactly what it's like to be stuck on the couch in pajamas. In fact... I'm like that most weekends. Love the idea of British Edward. *swoon* I also love that the girls' dorm is "eight floors of whores", that made me giggle.
| joayla chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Loved the changes Hun! Him marching into the bathroom worked better he was all caveman stacking his claim to her.
| 84gemstone chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Oh i liked Edward going into the bathroom to get her...Ok so i think Edward has been hit but why did the room go black for Bella? Need to phone Jo she if she knows