Reviews for Mayhem
Mrs. owl chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
Please update agein. I adore you stories and am really sad to see them unfinished. They're brilliant!

Note: You called Elf-Harry from Chapter 1-3: Keeley Orion Malfoy
Then you suddenly changed his name into Hayden for the last two chapters.
thrnbrooke chapter 5 . 3/22/2011
continue!
domsijohn chapter 5 . 1/15/2011
this is really good looking forward to more
domsijohn chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
okay waiting for more
domsijohn chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
good
domsijohn chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
pretty cute
domsijohn chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
i like it alot
Celestialuna chapter 5 . 11/7/2010
Can't wait for more, I like it when Harry is a malfoy!
Celestialuna chapter 4 . 11/7/2010
good chapter!
Celestialuna chapter 2 . 11/7/2010
Totally love stories with Harry as an elf, good chapter!
Celestialuna chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Awesome start!
BYoshi1993 chapter 5 . 10/31/2010
I haven't a clue whats going on anymore.
didydid chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
I like the idea for your story, however you have changed Harry's name too many times. Pick a name and stick with it if he's Orion call him Orion not Harry, or Keely or Hayden. Pick a name. If you aren't sure of a name while you are writing highlight the name every time you write it to come back to later.
faneka chapter 4 . 10/29/2010
Interesting look at HP. If Dumbles and Severus aren't the ones to change time, I wonder who is? Also, the elf training Orion is also named Tom? Looking forward to the next update.
Alice-the-irish-dancer chapter 4 . 10/24/2010
great chappie! cant wait for the next one!

~alice :D
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