|Reviews for Burn For You|
| RDoster2012 chapter 16 . 8/30/2014
I really enjoyed reading this... BUT I was slightly disappointed to see so many lines and scenes taken right out of the book. YET it was intriguing to see them handled differently. I only have two complaints. 1 is the lack of more! You left me wanting. And 2 is some of the spelling mistakes that made some sentences make no sense
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
Ever read Shields of Power by thunderful? Your story has familiar scenes and quotes that are present in a much older and better story. Especially the James and Alice thing, but there are more. I was enjoying this story until it felt like I had read it before.
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/26/2014
| 2manyfandomstho chapter 16 . 5/2/2014
Thanks so much for writing, I really enjoyed it!
| BringOnTheDrunkAlbino's chapter 16 . 4/22/2014
I would love it so much if you did a sequel (or sequels) for this. Like how would New Moon play out since her blood really isn't that 'attractive' toward them? This was awesome by the way! Loved it!
| cullenfreak16 chapter 15 . 3/19/2014
amazing amazing amazing i love it you are so gonna write a sequel
also haw about one-shots or out-takes of bella-and-edward-feeding-on-each-other itimate moments? watcha thinkin?
| MatingInspires chapter 16 . 2/7/2014
Enjoyed this story :)
| Naomi M chapter 16 . 1/21/2014
It was really good and it made me laugh when i found out what she was in the story because I've been watching a programme where the girl in it is a succubus
| walking in the sea chapter 16 . 12/16/2013
Gah! I love your story! I love a non-human Bella story, and yours is one of the BEST!
| Babylion Sakura chapter 6 . 10/2/2013
love this! It's amazing!
| bookreader911 chapter 16 . 8/10/2013
That was so much better than what was written of the original. I loved the entire story.
| AliceWynter chapter 16 . 7/24/2013
Your such a good writer! I HOPE U MAKE A SEQUAL! Luv u! 3
P.s, loved the ending ;)
| Valkyrie101 chapter 4 . 7/19/2013
I liked it but the spelling mistakes and the way some words are used is a little distracting for example the 'hear' when it should have been 'here'.
| Valkyrie101 chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I knew it! I'm obsessed with that show 'Lost Girl' that is about a succubus and I've been looking for a similar story in the twilight universe ...so thank you! The quality of writing is great and I can't wait to read the rest : )
| MiniNinjaPanda chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
Okay, I finished reading the story overnight. I loved it! I really like this version of Bella. She's so much stronger and fiercer here. It was interesting seeing everyone's reaction to her and what she is. I admit, I laughed hard when I found out myself. I wasn't expecting it. Loved how it followed most of the storyline of the book but still different and it made sense. Great read!