Reviews for Cheesy Macaroni and Ketchup
tinybabyleafs chapter 1 . 6/30/2016


Ahhhh, your characterization was so perfect! I loved reading this so much. Cavaliershipping and Palletshipping are probably my top two Gary ships, actually. Haha. You did a wonderful job! Daisy was adorable.

..."Practicing CPR"? Nice one, Ash. XD
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2014
I love it sooooooooooooooooooooo much! :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Manga nerdette chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
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Moka Akashia chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
Aww so adorable & next time & Gary, shut the door before you have sex with Ashy-Boy please. Daisy would have been scared fore life and eternedyif she wasn't supprized.
Kyotaroro chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I like this a lot! Kawaii! Love stories w/ comfort like this! Thanks for the publish!
NerdySamSays chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
that was so cute! love it
JoeBananas chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
Awww, that was so sweet! I really like how it was told from his daughter's point of view. That made it even more sweeter :3
Andy Mai Williams chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
" thing since max revive..." Brilliant. :D
Soulelova chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I really like this story. And Daisey is sooo cute!
Elysha chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Awww there is no more T.T
MistressOfRobins chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Awww, this one was really adorable :3 I was very skeptical in the start, because the mere thought of Gary/Dawn wasn't exactly too appealing to me. But I admit I enjoyed this one a lot :) Great job!

- R.M.L
tHe.DaRkEnEd.HaTrEd.Of.LoVe chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
! so ahmazing ! and its nice to no wut implied almost-sex is. lol love it! but u still need to update the othr one! this story does not put u off the hook‼
sailorlotus chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
As I said on dA...

That was so cute~ :3

Also, I bet Daisy would be uber adorable, 'cause she has Gary for a dad.
Junhazastripedsweater chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
hey, it's nursejun from dA.





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