Reviews for Ghosts / Unfinished Games snippets and outtakes
Sezstar chapter 5 . 3/9/2002
Sorry I haven't reviewed the earlier bits, but I'm avoiding all the ones with spoilers on! I think this piece of writing though is excellent, not just as a piece of Serevus musing, but as a piece of writing full stop. The last line "original sin..." is so powerful, and bitterly, piterfully true. Excellent.
I don't quite remember chapter 2 . 2/25/2002
P.S.

If my memory, once again, serves me, Snape *was* approaching Uncle Harry *with* Gabriel, who was previously greeted by a very enthusiastic little one. Right? RIGHT?

(Your story is excellent, and having Snape die would make for a poignant ending, but I must say... depressing...)
I don't quite remember chapter 1 . 2/25/2002
I kinda figured you might, considering the flow of the story, but...

Whoa. Hang on. You can't kill Snape - you wrote another story with "Uncle Harry" and another, younger son: Gabriel was several years past Sorting, and the little one was - er... five-ish if I remember correctly.

HA HA! SO THERE! YOU CAN'T KILL HIM! (Or did you delete that lovely side-story so you could?)
Morghaine chapter 4 . 2/25/2002
Oh my god... I am crying.

Can you really end it like this? I understand that the world is a brutal place, but surely... I don't know.

Thanks for letting us see into your thoughts.
Gwena Lanish chapter 3 . 2/23/2002
The end of this letter brought tears to my eyes.

It was perfect.