Each time I have read this story, it has moved me. Thank you!

More?

Aww man, I don't want this to end! It's my second time reading the entire story and I'm ready to read it again. How about a sequel set way in the future where golden-eyed vampires are accepted and can live among humans?

this is so sweet and tender and yet an eyeopener as far as Renee's self-centered personaltiy is, I never liked her in the canon, for just that reason

Somehow missed the Easter egg reference and then scolled up or down toofast, wow hot sex for Bella, that is funny, got a whiff of her blood when the window opened did our Edward?

Interesting. Too often people are aware they need to change but don't know how to take the first step to do that or are not motivated enough to follow through. Renee seems to lack both. Nice to read her side of meeting and what happened when she got home.

reasonable way for their relationship to be without Edward around and before he phased. Good that Carlisle was able to get truth and suggest helmets.

arrogant and manipulative Alice at work. hmm...too trusting.

interesting even with hangover she notices things

Edward buys it? No vamps in the house because he'd freak out?

I like seeing the other side of their wierd encounter.

Since I found this story late, I am just now reading the outtakes. I loved the story and was saving the outtakes to still have something left of the story to read. Your Bella is so perceptive. It is hard to believe that she did not figure out what Edward was sooner.

Renee is a pretty complex character, and not every writer gets that. She has had the scare of her life and it sent her back to the man who loves her so much. This is where she needs to be now, for her sake as well as the babies'. Too bad we know she won't stay for too long.

That's the trouble with kids falling in love at that age. It's very intense and this relationship was doomed as soon as Jake phased and imprinted. They neither one had any idea that was going to happen. Dr. Cullen gave them good advice about always wearing helmets, though.

It was as much as either Bella or Edward could handle, that first meeting. It went fairly well, until the breeze came through the open window. Good thing Edward can't read Bella's mind, he would have been pushed over the edge hearing her reaction to his lustful gaze. Knowing it excited her, he wouldn't have been able to resist as he did.