Reviews for Consequences
wandakv chapter 2 . 4/7
I'm really enjoying your story. I hope you finish it. Thanks :-)
PharmTech chapter 2 . 1/10
Did you seriously think you could leave it hanging there?! Common! You're killing me here! Please please please update!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
It would be amazing to see this continued, I am utterly addicted to your writing and would love to know what happens next!
Guest chapter 2 . 6/4/2016
I want more!
Fenix221 chapter 2 . 9/3/2014
More? There's more right?! I was very impressed with this piece. Other than a little punctuation and slipping in and out of tense, this work was rife with some of the most vivid description I've seen. I couldn't begin to innumerate all my favorite lines, ie 'he could go spelunking in the man's hidden depths.' Very nice. Thank you so much for sharing your talent!
Tacodestroyeravenger chapter 2 . 6/8/2014
Yammy1983 chapter 2 . 12/12/2011
love the story! will you ever continue it? that would be so great!
MavenAlysse chapter 2 . 8/9/2011
uh oh. Eliot's not doing too well. They took care of the bullet wound - did he mention his broken ribs? Can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for sharing so far.

Hawkslayer chapter 2 . 6/30/2011
This is sooo good! I hope there will be more because this story is awesome! I love the Eliot whump and you write really well. Please update; I really want to see what happens next. :)
drjones chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
More please...!
ardnaseel chapter 2 . 10/9/2010
This is soooooooooooo good!

I hope you plan to continue it!
Aelan Ryland chapter 2 . 10/5/2010
what happens next?
whimseyrhodes chapter 2 . 9/14/2010
Another stunning story, and there's more to be written, right? Hmmmmmm? There simply must be, as you can NOT leave us with such sspense!

I love the description of the 'syrupy narscissism' in the first chapter. That paragraph is in itself a fantastic description of what it must feel like for an alcoholic. Amazing, well worded and the images are crisp and cutting. Wonder what John Rogers would think of it? lol

This chapter, the parallel story lines of the future, again, wow. Continue this please, I adore your style!
alc5578 chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
This is a great follow up story! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please don't leave us in suspense!
SomeTaters chapter 2 . 8/11/2010
You're an amazing writer! and I really like this story. I think you keep everyone in character and can't wait for the next installment -

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