Great plot in the first dozen chapters! But things get way more complicated than I could imagine in the last few chapters so I end up completely puzzled about the ending and the reason why Arthur couldn't go with Ariadne. Overall a great fic. Just wish it could be a happy ending right after the first mission. Btw I'm personally curious about why you mentioned Harbin Institute of Technology in your fic lol.

So sweet! Wow such an amazing story

Wow. Just wow. Your story is amazing. Your writing is amazing. This fanfiction is exceptional. I love the fluid way you write, words just tumble out like a waterfall. I also love how the relationship between Arthur and Ariadne develps and I think that you write an intricate, complex and addictive plot. Keep writing, it's a talent! Спасибо, мне очень понравилось! :)

"I've met more open clams" - hee! Loved that line. I just watched Inception again and it inspired me to seek out fic - I know this is an old one, and who knows if you'll read this review, but it's really good.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, I truly enjoyed it. Inception is not my usual fandom, and I stumbled upon this fic, but I love the characterisation! Thank you!

THIS WAS SO GOOD! The ending was so emotional and promising and bittersweet, I loved it. The entire story is great!

Whoa! This chapter was so dramatic and good! Ariadne was cold at the end of the dream, but you wrote it really well.

This is very good and action-packed!

Good chapter! I like the detail that Ariadne is Canadian

That bit about Malaysia was quite sad... good writing!

Please, please, please, PLEASE tell me that this isn't over

That was so cute! And I really appreciate that it wasn't just fluff; you stayed true to the universe and characters. Also liked that you Incorporated science terminology throughout it, even in Ariadne's thought process. I didn't read all your author's notes but one caught my eye... I think it's awesome your physics class debated the physics of inception! Postulating on the possible science behind sci-fi is always fun! I just don't know too many people who do it. XD

Also. Clams. I laughed so hard. Excellent Eames representation. That is all.

After reading your whole work in a row it is impossible not to say something. I just rewatched Inception after almost 3 years without seeing it and just like previous readers i cried at the last paragraph. There's so much to talk about but i'll just say this : thank you for all the time dedicated to writing, i loved discovering the relationship between a&a from your point of view as well as the usual banter from good ol' Eames. I wish you the best for you studies (are you done? It's been years...litterally since you wrote this, i'm a little late i guess) . Thanks again for a wonderful story!

I was crying by the end of this I have no idea why but I was sobbing my eyes out it was so beautiful it was a work of art. I don't know anything other than this story now it has entrapped my mind. Thank you for writing this gem.

So amazing. Incredible. Your way with words is enchanting - and I had to look up several during the course of this story, which is always a delight. I can't wait to check out your other stories. :)