I can't wait for the team to find out what's REALLY bothering Ariadne! Those'll be SOME fireworks! ;D

I LOVE THIS! the roommate idea is so awesome!

Great chapter and I also loved the roommate. It gave Ariadne more of a back story too. She has been living and going to school in Paris for years so you would think she would have some friends or roommates that would notice her gone so much and coming and going with two different guys. It gave her move depth I think. Plus it was fun to have a girlfriend of hers tease her about the guys. Can't wait to read more!

I wonder what it's going to take for her to admit to Arthur what's going on?

Loved the bit with Jenna and finding out about Arthur's dad. It's sad they're still estranged.

Ailin made me laugh. Not sure which hottie I'd pick of Ariadne's two Can't fault her for either choice though.

Thanks for posting!

-Ellie

"That's the sign of a first rate thief – always take more than you need." Eames claps her on the shoulder and she nearly tips over under the weight.

This line was BRILLIANT. Even in a story centered on Arth/Ari you have all of the important side characters down PERFECTLY, and this is why you are the best and we should get married.

I can't emphasise enough how much I love the mystery of the Arthur-killing thing in her dreams, and how well this is all planning out. Forgive me for not being up to date with the last few chapters, but I just read 6-8 all at once so it was like a big treat for me!

So bla bla bla this is amazing I can't believe how fast you update you are a badass like no other this is the best Inception story in the fandom at the moment and I think we should get married and go live in my trailer park D

I think my favourite bit is her room-mate fixing her bed for her. Such a nice touch XD

This was a great chapter. Practically read your entire story in one sitting. I especiallyl love how you portray Arthur. And awesome, a little background story of his life. Oh and of course, the roomate. Great way to push Ariadne to go out with Arthur LOL

I can't wait for the next chapter! I love this story!

haha, i love her room-mate! can't wait for the 9th chapter, hope it comes out soon! ;)

Love this story!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I like the interaction between Arthur and Ariadne.

Keep up the good work!

Amazing! Please update ASAP because I love this story!

~Maddy

love the story.

hope you update soon.

I so thought Jenna was more important than the police dog training - I'd be a horrible extractor :( SOOOO cute seeing her get all flustered over the gents, especially by preventing her friend from getting too close to a well tailored, tall, handsome and just plain sexy man :D I enjoyed this chapter. It made me feel something new for our point man. Glad to know he has so much emotion, even if it is hidden away. Can't wait to see what happens with frechette's grandfather (ok maybe i'm more excited about the eames fun) but I'm truly most excited about the A/A developments. REALLY can't wait for me, ok now my essay long entry is done!

I love you for updating.

Oh and I loved Ailin. she reminds me of my best friend (:

I kinda like the tension between Ari and Arthur, i think it's quite realistic? I don't know if that's the right word but it just makes sense.

top job my friend lol crank out those chapters!

I love this, it's so good! Keep writing :)