Great! Thanks for writing.

Haha! Hilarious! Loving it still. Thanks for the update. :)

That was fantastic. It's funny how Ariadne has no idea that Arthur finds her delightful for her wickedly brilliant mind as much as anything else. If he were less reserved he would have squeed at her idea for

It's also sweet how Arthur softens for her. And lordy when he made that comment about not biting my mind went to the gutter too.*fans self*

Loved how everyone ganged up on Eames to support this as their way in. Can't wait to see it in action.

Interesting little bits of background with the two guys meeting Cobb through Mal. Usually it's assumed to be the other way around.

Thanks for posting. More soon?

-Ellie

Wow. This is a very good story. I think that you made the characters just like them in the movie, and you pegged my thought about the lawn chairs too. :) I give you thumbs up for creating a whole new job and starting it from sctratch. Good luck!

Really really good story. Really, cute, too. I can't help but grin every time Ariadne makes an observation about Arthur. You've basically set the stage for a potential Inception sequel, but a little more fluff wouldn't hurt. :3

But yeah, great work. And update soon, or else I think I might explode. :D

Lovely! What a brilliant idea - both yours in general and Ariadne's. It should be amusing but also great for the plot.

I love how the plot in this story is developing, and the touches of A/A are absolutely lovely.

This is awesome! PLease update sooooon!

I love the comment about Ariadne's height. Being short myself, I totally empathized with her. Anyway, this story is very interesting. I hope to see more of you soon.

I like the way this is shaping up! The budding Aruthur/Ariadne is freakin' adorable, and Eames was hilarious. I hope we'll get to see the rest of the team soon, though. *awaits update*

Lovely :)

Ah. It's refreshing how you write these characters. One of the closest so far to the actual portrayals in the movie. (And may I say you write a very good Eames? He's cracking me up this chapter.

Verygood. I hope to see a new chapter in the near future.

*_*

Marisol Akyri

brought a smile to my face. i like it :)

Hahaha love it! Very good descriptions :) Update soon!

Awesome! I love your story idea and can't wait to read more!

I like were this story is going c:

the current job you have them doing is interesting as well.

can't wait to read more!