Reviews for The Kidnapper
Guest chapter 19 . 2/5
Made me work up a blub. And i haven't cried since i was 11.
this was a good story.
Guest chapter 18 . 2/5
I was hoping for a life sentence...
ALSO why didn't Alex and Yugi kiss? The oppertunity was right there...
SetoKaibahimself chapter 19 . 8/13/2014
Mokuba: OMG I loved the story exept for the part when Yugi got hurt, were friends and friends don't like it when others get hurt

Me: oh Mokuba... Yes, I must agree, the story was great, and even though Yugi and I aren't friends, it was pretty sad that he had to go through that.
SetoKaibahimself chapter 18 . 8/13/2014
Oh wow, I can't believe the stories almost over, I'm kinda scared to read the last chapter because this story was amazing, one of the best ones ever... I mean *coughs* it was a good story...
SetoKaibahimself chapter 3 . 8/11/2014
He's a teen
SetoKaibahimself chapter 1 . 8/11/2014
I like the story, it's really good and seems that you put a lot of work into it! Continue writing more stories!
Yu-Gi-Oh chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
love the Devin character! Especially because my name is Devin, only I'm girl. Anyway the boys version to spell Devin is Devon. Lov your work!
blueeyesdarkmagic chapter 7 . 5/6/2014
here is an idea if you like it :

Kidnaps Confusion and Personalities

I tried my best to come up with a good name oh and this is actually the second time I am reading this but I couldn't come up with a name the first time
blueeyesdarkmagic chapter 3 . 5/6/2014
actually your both wrong the pharaoh is actually 5000 years old but I do agree he is a teen cause last I checked he died in ancient Egypt when he was a teen so that makes him a teen
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
i bet this story is gonna be good
The Forgotten Guardian chapter 19 . 5/11/2013
Hi just read this story and I cried you are an amazing writer poor Yugi
You should have Yami curse the b!$h
Caphawks chapter 19 . 12/30/2011
This was a great story! Thank you for writing it!

I want to say that I loved the characters of Krissy and Alex! They were spunky and had a lot of heart unlike most other OCs that I've read in other stories. I always enjoyed the fact that they would finish each others sentences as well. It made me laugh whenever I read those parts.

I also enjoyed Devin's character. He was shy and innocent, yet still managed to be a great OC. I grew so attached to him that when Cassandra started killing off the boys, I almost had a heart attack. I thought that you had killed him off! I was prepared to flip a table if you had. But luckily, you didn't kill him, so no table was flipped.

It was very emotionally stimulating as well. At several points during the story, I felt as if I was going to cry. (Actually did one time.) At others, I would feel sick to my stomach from what was happening. I also shed tears of joy towards the end when everyone finally escaped. In other words, you were able to play on emotions well.

Sorry that this has been so long, but I have one final thing to ask.

Did you get Mark and Greg's last names from Calvin and Hobbes? I laughed when I saw their last names and figured that you must've pulled them from there.
Youngbountygirl chapter 19 . 7/4/2011
I love this. It's sad, but I love the fight with that pedophile vs Yami. I was thinking she was going to rape him. yeah, you rap the kid, now the pharaoh's the next to go around lol. It was good, even though Yami didn't play a shadow game with her like I was hoping. Then again, what game WOULD he play with Cassandra? Oh well, great story.
ArtThouStupid chapter 19 . 6/20/2011
This, was a really good story :) It was quite a touching ending, as well :)
YamiHeart chapter 19 . 5/29/2011's over...:( Oh well, it was a blast to read. I'm getting teary-eyed just thinking about it ending. *blows nose*

Sarah: *eye roll* Good grief...
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