Reviews for Black Silk Tie
Hangininthere chapter 1 . 4/19
I like the story so far but there are many errors of syntax and semantics. You don’t get into an elevator and climb into the garage level, you descend to the garage level. Also, “him and I built this company” is incorrect in two ways. You wouldn’t say “him built this company,” also you cannot mix object and subject pronouns in one phrase. He and I are subject pronouns, while Him and Me are object pronouns. He and I built this company, it was not given to me and him. If you are not sure, just use we and us, they are easier to figure out.
MsLiss chapter 7 . 12/21/2022
She doesn’t want to be that girl but here she is
Oh so confusing
MsLiss chapter 5 . 12/21/2022
rfalc354 chapter 15 . 8/21/2022
When the story began the point was made that the playroom had a padlock and the housekeeper did not have a key. Why is there no lock on it the night of the party? Edward is not the type to not have it locked especially since a new sub was not under contract
Monnie Mcintosh chapter 42 . 6/23/2022
Loved every bit of this book. Thanks
Fleur50 chapter 41 . 11/21/2021
Quelle belle histoire passionnante!
Fleur50 chapter 40 . 11/21/2021
Fleur50 chapter 35 . 11/21/2021
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 11/16/2021
Départ intéressant!
zpower21 chapter 6 . 11/11/2021
Rose is rude, brash, and completely out of line. It’s like she’s never grown from high school. Not to mention Bella let’s her walk all over her. Stealing the dress from her simply because it was designer. Her advice is awful and way off. Always telling her how bad everything is. With friends like that, Bella does not need enemies.
Flora Mile chapter 42 . 10/8/2021
Beautiful story!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/1/2021
It’s “as” not “has”. FFS. Two entirely different words with different meanings. “As if I didn’t hear her” not “has if” coz that doesn’t even make sense. This is one of the irritating habits you have writing this story.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/1/2021
This is a copycat of FSOG :(
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2021
Oh dear this is dreadful. The writing is extremely juvenile and the spelling and grammar are appalling.
posum chapter 42 . 4/18/2021
just WOW! I loved this story from start to finish and it will forever be one of my favorites. You are a fantastic writer able to portray characters that you can live the story with them,,,that is rare, Loved it!
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