Reviews for Fault Line
mworth1019 chapter 21 . 4/29
cute story glad that brothers 1&3 are better at the end great job with two bit and Steve as,well
Guest chapter 21 . 5/17/2016
Smile-I'mTheEndOfAllThatYouSee chapter 21 . 4/5/2016
I read all 21 chapters in just one day. It was that good. I love the adventure. I love how Pony's adventure and Darry's social life allowed them to reevaluate their relationship with each other. Two-bit's dialogue was perfect. I love how the dream connected with Pony and Darry. It was perfect
Guest chapter 9 . 12/21/2015
Ayye I live in Norman! Haha idk why I got so excited about that but yeah... BOOMER SOONER!
Tobias Eaton chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
I can honestly say that I enjoyed every second of this fanfiction. I also loved how you ended it, overall this is one of my favorite outsiders stories!
Michelle Loves Chocolate 99 chapter 21 . 2/26/2014
I liked it. Good story.
justliving11 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
I just wanted to say that S.E Hinton wrote in her book, that soda doesn't smoke only when he wants to look tuff or something is really bothering him.
pinksugarrush chapter 3 . 12/27/2013
This is beautiful and so sad as well.

I feel sad when I read this because it seems that their relationship are starting to break into shambles and it makes me not want to read it. But I have to read it, because the writing is beautiful and I want to see a happy ending.

I love it. I'm so envious!

Keep up the good work!
Goldenponygirl chapter 21 . 9/21/2013
awsome. could do without pearl [i just reallyy hate ocxcharecters!] but awesome. i burst out laughing when two bit said 'if you want to get technical' that seems like good ole' two bit XD great story plz write more
karmine chapter 21 . 9/13/2013
Wow! Such a great story! Thank you for writing this :) I loved reading it.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17/2013
is the name of my band director
Silly McWilly Phillie chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
This has to be my favorite Outsiders fanfiction of all time. No mary-sues, no full-on romance, etc. I applaud you for writing such a good fanfiction. I never thought they existed! 3
Cirruz chapter 21 . 10/28/2011
You know what? I love practically ALL of your stories! I keep running across them, I'll read them, look at the author and go "HOLY CRAP! I LOVE THEM!" And, you're stories never disappoint! This was a great one!

Cirruz The Night Elf
KateCurtis chapter 21 . 10/8/2011
Great story! I absolutely looooooove it! . (five stars!)
Dramatic Night Walker chapter 21 . 8/29/2011
One word...

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