|Reviews for Unreliable Narrator|
| Snow Blind Raven chapter 8 . 12/5/2013
I really hope you update soon, this is well planned and written. Can't wait for more!
| may yuki chapter 8 . 11/17/2013
That took a while to catch up to, but great story :) I love the hinted romance btw raven and malchior even though im a hardcore robrae supporter
| chica13 chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
Oh. My. God. Does a dreamy Malchior not just make your heart flutter? Ugh. We need someone from Deviant Art to get creative. I really like this chapter, by the way! It made the "relationship" feel more real. I love you, Xaphie! TOODES!
| Royal dragoness chapter 8 . 10/16/2013
Yay! I over it, plz update ASAP! :)
| Empress Raven chapter 8 . 10/15/2013
I somehow hadn't noticed this story, unless I have and written a review for it before and just had forgotten about it. I am very much liking it though. And, I really need to clear my DVR and watch Sleepy Hollow. The Legend of Sleepy Hollow has always been one of my favorite stories, so anything based on it is something I jump at and everyone tells me the series is amazing so I haven't a clue why I am not watching it right away. I think it's because someone told me it mixes just the right amount of horror into it and I am a wuss. Anyway, point is, I am liking this story. I can see the age in it. The first chapter felt like there was a lot of repeating, and chapter two was just a dance around the same dialogue, but it's gotten better. Almost like you couldn't find your footing at first. Either way, I look forward to where this will lead.
| Kaarlinaa chapter 8 . 10/14/2013
Love it lol please continue and I want more cute scenes for malchior and raven
| Songbook12 chapter 8 . 10/14/2013
I loved this chapter! Fantastic, as usual. You haven't failed me yet! I haven't updated any of my Teen Titan stories in a while because Once Upon A Time started... And now I only want to write for that. Gr. Anyways, update soon!
| PureFaerie chapter 8 . 10/13/2013
Great chapter- the necklace moment was PERFECT.
| ZDrive chapter 8 . 10/13/2013
Oh yeah! High five! I LOVE Sleepy Hollow! And nice chapter! Update soon!
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/2/2013
This is very good, and I love Malchior fanfics! I'm glad you're continuing with this. A few quick things: Raven's never had very much control over her emotions, and I haven't seen her do anything drastic yet around Malchior. I wonder if you're going to bring Raven's prophecy into this at all at some point? Now that these two have a connection, maybe Malchior will share a vision of Trigon's wrath or something with Raven. Or will Slade make a sudden appearance? I can't wait to see what surprises you have instore!
| Songbook12 chapter 7 . 8/24/2013
It's so good! Update!
| Evilsangel chapter 7 . 8/18/2013
Awww Poor Malchior! I have to wonder if he will ever get his dragon back and what will become of Raven's. Please update asap! Sorry it took me a while to read this. Work has been killing me.
| PureFaerie chapter 7 . 8/17/2013
Can't wait to see the next chapter! Malchior and Raven are really cute together, even if they fight and get all angst-y with each other.
| Niki chapter 7 . 8/12/2013
This was amazing! You can't even fathom how happy I was when I saw that you had updated this.
| Annalynn Roe chapter 7 . 8/8/2013
You're back! (to writing UN, that is) Yes!
This story has been sitting on my Alert list for a while, and now I'm glad to see for good reason!
Can't wait for the next chapter.