|Reviews for Desert Secrets|
| huinsutt99 chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
Personally I liked this chapter. I really hope you continue writing this story, I think it could be an incredible tale.
| grace divine chapter 2 . 3/28/2013
More this is very good!
| scorchedtrees chapter 2 . 12/20/2012
Wow! This is really interesting and quite a unique idea! Hope to see more :) I like how you incorporated Jet.
| crystalfilm chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
Ninja Zutara? I'm excited :D
| crystalfilm chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Love the premise of the story, it's definitely a really interesting AU that I'm looking forward to reading. I think you've written Zuko superbly, pretty much spot on how he would be had there had been no banishment.
| Dreaming 11 chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
I'm kind of ashamed it took me a while to catch the painted lady reference. But that's okay! I got it in the end. :P I'm really glad you have that aspect in.
| The Guardian White Wolf chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
First off excellent writing as per usual.
I did like the language barrier that seems to be coming slightly out in the story. (i.e Sokka convo) That can lead, I imagine to any numerous situations u want. (And I wonder what you will do)
In all honesty the chapter was slower than I liked for normal circumstances but that's to be expected and despite my usual preferences, I liked the fact that you took the time get interactions between zuko and few ppl not just Katara, I really hate when ppl focus solely on the couples with stories like these and I've yet to see you do this.
While Zuko wasn't our usual temperamental firebender there was something totally him in his blatant refusal to eat or talk for most of the time because of his pride, so well done.
Can't wait for the next chappie and ur ninja!Zutara.
Keep up the awesome work.
| Morna chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
I have to admit that my feelings regarding this chapter are mixed. On the one hand, I loved the Zuko and Katara interaction. I think you did a very good job of conveying their dynamics even though this story is in an AU setting. I also like the building of the distinct culture.
On the other hand, a few things have me confused. Is this an alternate version of the Four Nations or have you transplanted the characters into our world? Are characters capable of bending in the sense of the show or is it through some alternate means like magic? I also kind of found Smellerbee's fondness of Zuko a little ooc for her. I remember her being kind of gruff in the show and not really prone to crushes and things like that. I'm sorry I'm being so critical.
I really do love your writing and this storyline. It is definitely interesting. I just am trying to get a better understanding of it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| zutara4evr chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
very nice indeed! l cannot wait 4the next chapter!
| AnnaAza chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
| AnnaAza chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Great start so far, but Smellerbee is a girl.
| cuzimaw3som317 chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
yay! -twirls with joy like the ballerina she is not-
i like this story. that's a bit of a 'no, der' statement, but oh well.
| Morna chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
There's nothing quite like a good Avatar AU. I like the premise of this story so far. It leaves a lot to the imagination. And I have to be honest, if it comes down to updating this one or Aubade, I think I would go with this one. I loved Aubade as well but somehow this story line seems to fit the Avatar universe much more easily.
| batz108 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Hmm...you never fail to capture my intrest with just one chapter. I like both of the new stories you've posted. I think that I would be more interested in finding out what happens in Aubade though, being that it seems like you know what you want to do and where you want to go with it. Plus I think it sounds cool:P Good luck whatever you do!
| cuzimaw3som317 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
well, I thought it was smurf-tastic, and as much as I like Aubade, this one seems far more interesting to me.
anyway, 'twas awesomist in the epic-ness of all ways, leaving only the next chapter to be desired.
XD can't wait!