|Reviews for Empty|
| Sophies-Welt chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Great story. Please continue :-)
| hcficawardsmods chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
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| o.ForeverYoung.o chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I really liked this. Angst is so fun isn't it? Johnny Cash really fit the mood.
This really has potential for more to be added I think. There are a lot of interesting questions you've asked, yet haven't answered. I wouldn't suggest adding more chapters (as I think this is great as a stand-alone story) but perhaps doing a sequel? Maybe give us a little indication why House was so desperate to find her, and focus on her homecoming (which I think would be very interesting now that he's with Cuddy).
| Limaccia chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I thought it was really well done. Certainly plenty angsty enough for me . . . .
| AllyCameron chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Good? This is definitely way BETTER than good! Very well done!
| schrodingers cat 13 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Johnny Cash! Thought I'd never see the day. :) I generally hate covers, but he's one of the few singers that has as good or even better covers than are the originals. Hurt happens to be one of my favourite songs by him, so that's extra points for you. :)
This story is good, more than good actually. Your best so far, I think.
The emotions Cameron's feeling came through very clearly, how lost she feels... I like how you managed to convert everyday actions into something broken down, as eating, taking a shower and sleeping. I also like the dichotomy you painted: before vs. now, play pretend vs. reality, happiness vs. sadness, letting go vs. hanging on etc.
"it's better to feel pain than to feel nothing at all." A bit of Three days grace channeling through? :)
There are some great ideas in this fic, too many to list them all. What I especially like is that she clings onto her love for House, because it's all she has left.
I'm not entirely sure about the ending. At first I thought that you should leave this one with a sad ending, but I think it could potentially work if you ended it on a happy note. But I still think that you should rephrase the "come home" part. It feels a bit off, not powerful enough.
As far as everything else goes, there's a couple of mistakes, but nothing too bad. All in all, this is a very good story.
This made me wonder. It feels this story is on a whole different level than your other one. Was it because you were more emotional when writing it and invested more of yourself into it? It does feel more engaged. I can write happy or sad stories no matter how I feel, but some writers need to get into the mood first. Think what you did differently this time: music, atmosphere... and then try to recreate it the next time you write. You have to feel or at least understand the story to be able to write it well. As a pointer to your other story, add a bit more descriptions and inner thoughts of House and Cameron. You've proven with this one that you can write (at least Cameron's) thoughts very well.
Oh, and I suggest you leave this as a one shot, adding on to it would just ruin it.
| laura34000lr chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
First of all, I love this song.
Secondly, the angst at the beginning of the story is spot-on. Really well-written.
The whole story was really good and even more with the touch of hope at the end of the story, with House's call.
| tbornotb chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
WHY THIS CAN'T HAPPEN IN THE SHOW!
WILL YOU CONTINUE THIS?
| lovefanfic55 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I would love to see more of this short story...but if not... this was well written, enjoyed the end especially...House admitting she was a hard person to find...and wanting her to come home...sal
| luvhouse4ever chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
i LOVED your STORY. Any story with house and cameron is good. YOU have to do another chapter PLEASEEEEE LOL.