Reviews for Dissension in the Ranks
Blew chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
Please, continue it! I love it, you can really use the characters, and this is very difficult. So, please, !Chapter 2!
nedandchuck chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
it's.. really interesting. I don't men it in a bad way. But it kind of makes me wonder what's wrong.
Kara no Usagi chapter 1 . 9/4/2011
This is a great basis for a story, please continue.
Shiramieyuki chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
Oh what a tease, please continue. :))
cocain2 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
Very short,but I really like update soon.
annie chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Wow!

Keep up the good job!

Finish the next chapters fast! :D

Its good!
Samuez chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Very nice. It's actually similar in dialogue and the writing style as to the light novel, maybe somewhat to the anime as well.
wooden cards chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
great start! please update soon
DarkRose Dilettante chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
YES! More bakemonogatari fics! I LOVE this anime and I LOVE the HitagixKoyomi pairing, but there are hardly ANY fics about these two ;_;

Excellent job so far, you've managed to keep both of them in character. Senjougahara getting jealous is so adowable. :)

I really can't wait to see what happens next...

Update sooon, 'kay? :3
worldreminiscence chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
OMG YEEEEY! I like ur writing style! That was sooo Hitagi! U did a good job and it's just chapter 1! x] Oh God, u need to continue this as I'll be really a fan of urs x] WOOH I love Hitagi and Koyomi :] Now I'm curious *O*

Hahaha XD Koyomi u playboy lmao joke :D

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