Reviews for Pokemon Jake Dragon's Adventures
MonfernoFreak chapter 19 . 8/17/2012
Oh, now I see the contest part. But I would've still liked to see it though... Anyway, good chapter, it was long and had a lot of action! :D
MonfernoFreak chapter 18 . 8/17/2012
Where the hell was the contest?! Sorry, I'm a contest fan. Did Crystal miss it or something and how could Jake sleep till three in the afternoon? Anyway, excluding the contest part it was good C:
MonfernoFreak chapter 17 . 8/17/2012
Pretty cool chap but I think Jolteon and Oddish fell to quickly, I mean, Jolteon is a very powerful Pokemon. Knowing Earthquake? And knowing Thunderbolt? Anyway, it was good :D
MonfernoFreak chapter 16 . 8/17/2012
Hmm... It was longer and it was good to see an evolution but I would've chosen a Vaporeon, or Flareon if I wrote this. No offense, but Jolteon is the worst out of those three. But Espeon even worse! Anyway, good chap ;D
MonfernoFreak chapter 15 . 8/17/2012
Yeah, like you said it was short but it was still good :)
MonfernoFreak chapter 14 . 8/14/2012
Long chap, yay :D Yes, you said it. His Pokemon learn moves way to fast... But very cool chapter :DDD
MonfernoFreak chapter 13 . 8/14/2012
I know you said it already, but that's a very short chapter! But anyway, i can't wait for the gym battle _
MonfernoFreak chapter 12 . 8/14/2012
Quite a cool chap. There weren't any weird parts I didn't understand in this, apart from where Ryan suddenly jumped into the bush... Anyway, good :3
MonfernoFreak chapter 11 . 8/14/2012
Why did Jake faint? You didn't explain before or after, and Morgan's Pokemon kept fainting so quickly. Still a good read though :D
MonfernoFreak chapter 10 . 8/14/2012
I know you put this in their, but f##k that contest was short! All there was was here performnace and Torchic using Fire Spin. Honestly, I wanted to see more. Anyway, the parts you did do were pretty good so I can forgive you :)
MonfernoFreak chapter 9 . 8/13/2012
Cool chap, and the length is there too! But its just in one attack Geodude was knocked out and same for Eevee, and when did Charmander learn Metal Claw and Growl? Anyway, it was a cool battle so I guess I can skip opver those :)
MonfernoFreak chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
LOLOLOLOL! I see what you did there, the "Giggity" line from Family Guy. Funny Guy right here. Good chapter btw.
MonfernoFreak chapter 7 . 8/12/2012
You know, your story makes me want to keep on reading! But just watch out for the spelling errors, and maybe make it a little longer. But that's ok, I'm still going to keep reading :D
MonfernoFreak chapter 6 . 8/12/2012
No offense, sort of a boring chapter... But I don't see why no one is surprised that Jake has Mew! Not Ryan, not Nurse Joy. Anyway, other than that a sort of good read came out of this :\
MonfernoFreak chapter 5 . 8/12/2012
Hmm, interesting chap. Although I thought atleast one of Jake's Pokemon would faint. But Mew's way to strong to get defeated, so, I can see your point. Good chapter :D
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