Reviews for Up
Lillywhite1 chapter 1 . 8/27/2017
Thanks for writing this story!
Halo221 chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
Mmm very tasty one shot!
rubell chapter 1 . 11/14/2013
small critique...a few times during the dialogue i couldnt tell who was speaking...other than that it was fabulous!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
Who knew being stuck in an elevator could be so hot! Lol. Great o/s!
MatingInspires chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Love it!
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Mmmmm please
Keep Calm And Creep On chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
That was so hot. Loved it. Please tell me that you are going to write more? Maybe a collection of one shots? Just a suggestion. :) Good job again!
fantasticme chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
who thought being stuck in a elevator can be so fun?
leegee123 chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Followed a rec on TLS - glad I did. Loved your story. Sexy and fun with great details in the writing. Thanks !
Iklepixie chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Found on lemonade stand. Loving the ride
onyourmouth chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
loved this!
together25x3 chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
YUMMY! I love it!
Julia-S77 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
it was so lovely that they had both been watching each other from afar for so long before the left gave them the incentive to speak to each other.

Great one shot, loved it x
shandi25 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Hott wow that got the heat upppp... Wow you should expand

Shandi
Melany333 chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
loved it
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